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  • KeroKaiFroggie

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    interesting...!!!! Very... INTERESTING!!!! awesome plot.
    September 3rd, 2010 at 08:13am
  • Sailor Meranda

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    I like it. I think the you's are a bit odd. I mean saying from her pov or I (like first person) would be good. But, I don't know you, may be a good way, i'm no english major. : ) I enjoyed the plot though.
    November 11th, 2008 at 08:47am
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