Ah Shaant! Eek I would like his point of view, just so you could know what's going on in his mind but I think it would be better if you did a whole other story because it may screw with your reader's heads. haha But I love this story lots. =)
I am, with out a doubt, in love with this story. It makes me laugh out loud, and I think you capture Shaant really well. I could actually see him acting like this. I also really like Charli and Jeff's characters.
i feel bad for shaant in the story but at the same time i don't because he does nothing to clarify how he really wants things, he just gives her the same shit that she gives him, a neverending cycling you know?
I completely agree with smutty scenes being awkward but this is so good. Even though I'm not that much of a fan of Shaant lately, you make me want to be a fan again. :]
ya, she is kinda mean...but maybe, she just has a hard shell, maybe shaant can soften her up....(wow, that could sound dirty, but i didnt intend it to...) so ya, i love the story keep it up :) (and i could see how her charater is fun to write :P )
damn...she got fired that sucks....(but not as much as shaant sucks...sorry...i just had to....:P)so ya, at least theres some logic behind her cheating ways....and i guess that is a distraction....though probably not the smartest.......hm....well whatever, i love the story keep it up XD
loving it XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and lol, boys always get uncomfortable with our femine needs XD its actually quite funny XD!!!!!!! lol, but ya, i love it, keep it up!!
loved it! now, i wonder how will Shaant respond to that?? and i wonder how much shaant likes her....like a relationship like, or does he just like her as a f*ck buddy??hm...i hope its the first! well i cant wait for more, so keep it up XD