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  • across the universe;

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    WAHH! I have this horrible... horrible... HORRIBLE feeling that she might be preggers with Shaant's baby. Oh dear. Hahah. Anyway... great chapter =]
    January 3rd, 2009 at 10:42pm
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    Ah Shaant! Eek I would like his point of view, just so you could know what's going on in his mind but I think it would be better if you did a whole other story because it may screw with your reader's heads. haha But I love this story lots. =)
    January 2nd, 2009 at 10:37pm
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    I am, with out a doubt, in love with this story. It makes me laugh out loud, and I think you capture Shaant really well. I could actually see him acting like this. I also really like Charli and Jeff's characters.

    I can't wait for chapter 15 (:
    December 31st, 2008 at 07:55pm
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    Aw why can't they just be happy together? This is just real sad. =(
    December 26th, 2008 at 08:49pm
  • doesn'tbelieveinlove

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    i feel bad for shaant in the story but at the same time i don't because he does nothing to clarify how he really wants things, he just gives her the same shit that she gives him, a neverending cycling you know?
    December 25th, 2008 at 11:59pm
  • myreasonforbreathing

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    Hahaha! This is soooo gooood and it's only getting better. :]
    December 22nd, 2008 at 07:22pm
  • DontGet_It_InMyEye

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    I really like this! more please?
    December 21st, 2008 at 02:58am
  • Emi

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    I love this story, it's fun, I love the revenge parts and how mean riley is xD
    *subscribes*
    December 19th, 2008 at 08:43am
  • myreasonforbreathing

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    I completely agree with smutty scenes being awkward but this is so good. Even though I'm not that much of a fan of Shaant lately, you make me want to be a fan again. :]
    December 18th, 2008 at 03:35am
  • hockeyXgirlsXrock

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    ya, she is kinda mean...but maybe, she just has a hard shell, maybe shaant can soften her up....(wow, that could sound dirty, but i didnt intend it to...) so ya, i love the story keep it up :) (and i could see how her charater is fun to write :P )
    December 16th, 2008 at 03:53am
  • Jay Lynn

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    lol "Everyone is asleep" You dirty dirty boy Shaant...
    haha kidding
    But good update =)
    December 11th, 2008 at 02:43am
  • hockeyXgirlsXrock

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    damn...she got fired that sucks....(but not as much as shaant sucks...sorry...i just had to....:P)so ya, at least theres some logic behind her cheating ways....and i guess that is a distraction....though probably not the smartest.......hm....well whatever, i love the story keep it up XD
    December 3rd, 2008 at 12:53am
  • JaffaCakes

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    Ha Ha awesome, wouldnt it be awesome to be able to use Shaant,
    well i wouldnt use him if i had the chance to but heyy
    nice update!!
    December 2nd, 2008 at 11:57pm
  • hockeyXgirlsXrock

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    Loved it XD!!!!! that was some sweet revenge XD lol.... great update, keep it up XD
    November 29th, 2008 at 10:53pm
  • Raven0612

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    Loved it!I want more Shaant!XD
    November 29th, 2008 at 10:14pm
  • SuckerTakesTheSaint

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    hahahaahaha even though that was a filler, it was highly entertaining!!!
    November 27th, 2008 at 05:29am
  • hockeyXgirlsXrock

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    loving it XD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and lol, boys always get uncomfortable with our femine needs XD its actually quite funny XD!!!!!!! lol, but ya, i love it, keep it up!!
    November 27th, 2008 at 12:34am
  • Franceschi;

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    me likes
    November 26th, 2008 at 07:24pm
  • hockeyXgirlsXrock

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    loved it! now, i wonder how will Shaant respond to that?? and i wonder how much shaant likes her....like a relationship like, or does he just like her as a f*ck buddy??hm...i hope its the first! well i cant wait for more, so keep it up XD
    November 22nd, 2008 at 07:39pm
  • SuckerTakesTheSaint

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    haha I would have taken Shaant into the bathroom with me...
    haha I'd totally become a skank for him haha
    I'm weird haha
    November 21st, 2008 at 05:57pm