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  • Mysticgal.

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    I like it so far. It's interesting.
    But I hope something happens soon. (:
    May 9th, 2010 at 01:57am
  • J. Third

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    Ever since I read this story, Ive been calling everyone 'Wodd'.
    HAHAHAHA!
    April 25th, 2010 at 01:22pm
  • StruckByLightening

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    I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS STORY! It's absoloutely amazing, the whole plot is really interesting. Deffo gonna subscribe. Update soon please?

    xx :)
    April 10th, 2010 at 10:00pm
  • J. Third

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    Just read it and thought it was really good!
    I like it.
    Update whenever you can!
    April 9th, 2010 at 09:12am
  • Settling For Less.

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    Great updateee XD
    March 19th, 2010 at 04:32am
  • occulta.

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    I'm so late! XD I should have given you my opinion like... weeks ago. Anyway, I really can't point out a thing that I didn't like, srsly. I'm enchanted by this story.

    Happy face
    October 22nd, 2009 at 03:08am
  • Aprilette

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    Lol, this is my first real attempt at a story so I would think Lucifer's Angel would be better :tehe: My first story was actually a vampire one but Quizilla AXED it by cutting every paragraph off and I can't fix it so AGGGH. :arms: Glad you like it though =D
    October 3rd, 2009 at 07:24pm
  • occulta.

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    :omfg: This is as good as Lucifer's Angel

    :cheese: APRIL YOU'RE A GENUIS!
    October 3rd, 2009 at 06:39am
  • visualprince

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    Update sooonnn please I've been waiting for one!
    September 3rd, 2009 at 06:50am
  • Aprilette

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    ^ ^ ^
    Will do =D
    September 2nd, 2009 at 02:57am
  • crushesalot14

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    oh i like it very much.
    just the type of story i need right now lol
    please keep at it
    September 1st, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • Aprilette

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    Read the prologue. It has me hooked already. Mosdef subbing. :D
    I'm glad your interested! :arms:
    August 24th, 2009 at 03:25am
  • hellwin.

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    Read the prologue. It has me hooked already. Mosdef subbing. :D
    August 23rd, 2009 at 10:24pm
  • visualprince

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    Oh, and I read the last chapter and found two things I consider a bit problematic, it would be great if you could explain these in the next chapter:
    1. The sooner you check out, the more supspicious you become. You didn't mention whose name they registered with so I'm assuming its their name, and the cops would look them up as the first.
    2. Hiding the body in the room's shower is a dead giveaway. The cops do know how to track people even without their phones.

    But I'm waiting for more!!!
    August 13th, 2009 at 06:24pm
  • visualprince

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    OMG! Yes! Finally a story with such morbid beauty!!!!!!

    More! More!

    Love,
    Em.

    P.S. Hope you could check out my story in my link... not as mrobid unfortunately :(
    August 13th, 2009 at 04:58pm
  • Aprilette

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    BodySnatcher:
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    eeeehehehee. dun worry! i love this story.
    you know what adds to the creepiness? reading this at 2 AM. scary stuff. :D Dance

    and now, i dont know if i like marc so much. i mean, i knew he wasnt good, but..ahhhhh.
    oh, and this is me to Ant. Ha Ha and this is me to laila Bye

    and this is me to YOU Clap more soon, please?
    Lol, well Marc is not an easy one to get to know. He'll come around eventually, don't give up hope on him. And, what nothing in response to Jurke and his russian-ness? lmao
    AHH. HOW COULD I FORGET JURKE? AND MARISHA?! jurke: Smiley <i'm cheering him on while he cleans up! :) and BBB: Smiley she got dissed by marc. ha. :P IN YO FACE.

    uhmm. OH. right.
    iheartadam2:
    Ahhhhhhhh! Intense! Lovers it! :)
    ^ I RECRUITED YOU! :D In Love yaaaaaay.

    ..this story makes me super hyper. i dont think thats a good sign. but its mad good :) i need more. soon, please? :D
    Yay, glad you like it so much! :arms: And recruiting is very good Smiley Thanks for being a loyal fan! =D
    August 6th, 2009 at 05:42am
  • Pixie Poison

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    Aprilette:
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    eeeehehehee. dun worry! i love this story.
    you know what adds to the creepiness? reading this at 2 AM. scary stuff. :D Dance

    and now, i dont know if i like marc so much. i mean, i knew he wasnt good, but..ahhhhh.
    oh, and this is me to Ant. Ha Ha and this is me to laila Bye

    and this is me to YOU Clap more soon, please?
    Lol, well Marc is not an easy one to get to know. He'll come around eventually, don't give up hope on him. And, what nothing in response to Jurke and his russian-ness? lmao
    AHH. HOW COULD I FORGET JURKE? AND MARISHA?! jurke: Smiley <i'm cheering him on while he cleans up! :) and BBB: Smiley she got dissed by marc. ha. :P IN YO FACE.

    uhmm. OH. right.
    iheartadam2:
    Ahhhhhhhh! Intense! Lovers it! :)
    ^ I RECRUITED YOU! :D In Love yaaaaaay.

    ..this story makes me super hyper. i dont think thats a good sign. but its mad good :) i need more. soon, please? :D
    August 6th, 2009 at 05:37am
  • Aprilette

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    So, I've had chapter 11 stuffed in my notebook for a while now. I'm just unsure whether or not to post it because I only had 5 readers on chapter 10. Which hurt cause I had more on the other chapters. So... yeah. Not sure I have the heart to post it right now =/
    July 30th, 2009 at 01:32am
  • Aprilette

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    iheartadam2:
    Ahhhhhhhh! Intense! Lovers it! :)
    Thank you :cute: :arms:
    July 18th, 2009 at 05:40am
  • Settling For Less.

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    Ahhhhhhhh! Intense! Lovers it! :)
    July 18th, 2009 at 05:34am
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