Aim For The Heart My Bloody Valentine - Comments

I like it so far. It's interesting.
But I hope something happens soon. (:

Ever since I read this story, Ive been calling everyone 'Wodd'.
HAHAHAHA!

I FREAKIN' LOVE THIS STORY! It's absoloutely amazing, the whole plot is really interesting. Deffo gonna subscribe. Update soon please?

xx :)

Just read it and thought it was really good!
I like it.
Update whenever you can!

Great updateee XD

I'm so late! I should have given you my opinion like... weeks ago. Anyway, I really can't point out a thing that I didn't like, srsly. I'm enchanted by this story.

Lol, this is my first real attempt at a story so I would think Lucifer's Angel would be better :tehe: My first story was actually a vampire one but Quizilla AXED it by cutting every paragraph off and I can't fix it so AGGGH. :arms: Glad you like it though =D

:omfg: This is as good as Lucifer's Angel

:cheese: APRIL YOU'RE A GENUIS!

Update sooonnn please I've been waiting for one!

^ ^ ^
Will do =D

oh i like it very much.
just the type of story i need right now lol
please keep at it

akashasspawn:

Read the prologue. It has me hooked already. Mosdef subbing. :D

I'm glad your interested! :arms:

Read the prologue. It has me hooked already. Mosdef subbing. :D

Oh, and I read the last chapter and found two things I consider a bit problematic, it would be great if you could explain these in the next chapter:
1. The sooner you check out, the more supspicious you become. You didn't mention whose name they registered with so I'm assuming its their name, and the cops would look them up as the first.
2. Hiding the body in the room's shower is a dead giveaway. The cops do know how to track people even without their phones.

But I'm waiting for more!!!

OMG! Yes! Finally a story with such morbid beauty!!!!!!

More! More!

Love,
Em.

P.S. Hope you could check out my story in my link... not as mrobid unfortunately :(

BodySnatcher:

Aprilette:

BodySnatcher:

eeeehehehee. dun worry! i love this story.
you know what adds to the creepiness? reading this at 2 AM. scary stuff. :D

and now, i dont know if i like marc so much. i mean, i knew he wasnt good, but..ahhhhh.
oh, and this is me to Ant. and this is me to laila

and this is me to YOU more soon, please?

Lol, well Marc is not an easy one to get to know. He'll come around eventually, don't give up hope on him. And, what nothing in response to Jurke and his russian-ness? lmao

AHH. HOW COULD I FORGET JURKE? AND MARISHA?! jurke: <i'm cheering him on while he cleans up! :) and BBB: she got dissed by marc. ha. :P IN YO FACE.

uhmm. OH. right.

iheartadam2:

Ahhhhhhhh! Intense! Lovers it! :)

^ I RECRUITED YOU! :D yaaaaaay.

..this story makes me super hyper. i dont think thats a good sign. but its mad good :) i need more. soon, please? :D

Yay, glad you like it so much! :arms: And recruiting is very good Thanks for being a loyal fan! =D

Aprilette:

BodySnatcher:

eeeehehehee. dun worry! i love this story.
you know what adds to the creepiness? reading this at 2 AM. scary stuff. :D

and now, i dont know if i like marc so much. i mean, i knew he wasnt good, but..ahhhhh.
oh, and this is me to Ant. and this is me to laila

and this is me to YOU more soon, please?

Lol, well Marc is not an easy one to get to know. He'll come around eventually, don't give up hope on him. And, what nothing in response to Jurke and his russian-ness? lmao

AHH. HOW COULD I FORGET JURKE? AND MARISHA?! jurke: <i'm cheering him on while he cleans up! :) and BBB: she got dissed by marc. ha. :P IN YO FACE.

uhmm. OH. right.

iheartadam2:

Ahhhhhhhh! Intense! Lovers it! :)

^ I RECRUITED YOU! :D yaaaaaay.

..this story makes me super hyper. i dont think thats a good sign. but its mad good :) i need more. soon, please? :D

So, I've had chapter 11 stuffed in my notebook for a while now. I'm just unsure whether or not to post it because I only had 5 readers on chapter 10. Which hurt cause I had more on the other chapters. So... yeah. Not sure I have the heart to post it right now =/

iheartadam2:

Ahhhhhhhh! Intense! Lovers it! :)

Thank you :cute: :arms:

Ahhhhhhhh! Intense! Lovers it! :)