Unwanted In Wonderland - Comments

Ahh!
You made my day!
I love Gisselle and her evil plans.
Zacky needs to do something with her. He clearly likes her quite a bit.
Thank you so much for the update!
xx

By the way, that Johnny thing... INCREDIBLE!

By the way, that Johnny thing... INCREDIBLE!

wow, awesome. I would have trade her for less money!

Thanks for the update, I loved it...
Merry Christmas!

Ha Gena is gone! This is sooo funny, my sides hurt from laughing so hard by the end of each chapter. You are a really really fantastic writer!

Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you for the wonderful update!
And, I hope Gena gets out of the picture soon :(
Anyhow, I hope you update soon!
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Is anyone else wanting Zack to leave Gena for Giselle as bad as I am?
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I feel sorry for her, I just want him to leave her and then go to Giselle and have amazing 'love you' sex
^.^
Because he totally loves her, I mean, he won't let anyone get personal with her so the least he could do is do it himself xD

hi!!
omg;
i love this story!
i'm serious.
i read through it all and i subscribed!

giselle seems rather manipulative sometimes;
and uses her 'cute act' way too much. (:
and she reminds me of a friend...hmmm..
but all's cool . :D

P/s: they are going to JAMAICA??
omg.
can't wait for that chapter. xD

<3!

Arrgh, I'm hooked, I read the whole thing in a day and now I keep on checking every hour or so to see if there's a new chapter that I haven't read.
I really do love the story and Giselle's personality reminds me of my friends so it's really fun to read.

I just have to say that I am completely in love with this story! I always find myself dying from laughter. The chapter lengths are perfect!!!

I love Giselle, she's hilarious, inventive, smart and human! I just hope Zacky pulls his head from his ass, gets over his "obligation" to Gena and realizes Giselle is the one! I also love how the characters seem to get a lot of face time. No one's really left out. Each guy has their own special relationship with her and the girls are her allies.

This is one of the better stories I have read in a while. Can't wait for more.

wow, Im so glad I found this story!!!
I fucking love it!!!!
The chapters are long, and the gramatics are awesome, and the plot its funny and interesting and I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!

I think Damsel_of_Darkness sums it all up quite well....

I'd also like to add that you are amazing, and make me weep with joy every time you add a chapter.

Oh My God. When Gisselle was teasing Zacky and saying shit about Dallas... I thought he was going to pop a blood vessel!! Could he be anymore jealous?!?! I swear to god, I can't wait to see a reaction if she ever does do something with him.... Shit will hit the fan majorly.

The 'sex scene'.... Again, with the teasing, woman! They need to get down and do the dirty for real. They'll both feel better for it! I mean, Zacky only had to hear her moaning in a dream... and the boy needed a cold shower... He should've just woken her up and screwed her brains out. Consequences be damned!! She was even unconsciously giving him permission by moaning his name and taking her dress off... he should've just taken advantage and had his dirty way with her.

First favourite line:

“Yes, Jesus Christ himself descended from the heavens for the sole purpose of telling me that you have the hots for Zacky.” - Cracks me up!! I'd have to slap him if I was her... haha.

The dinner.. God. I freaking loved that!! His mothers questions.. and him fighting so hard to keep from bursting a string of obscenties regarding Dallas was so hilarious. He's lucky he didnt choke on his wine, the speed he was gulping it down... hahaha. And I love his mother... she's hinting at what we all know is true... I would've loved to see what her answer to that would've been... hahaha.

My other favourite lines:

“Finished!” Johnny closed the bottle. “I am SO fucking good! Look at that! It’s perfect!”

Brian walked over and looked at my feet. “It is perfect. You are so fucking gay bro. Congratulations.” He patted Johnny’s back.

“Fuck you…”

That is why I love Johnny in this story. He's so cute... :D

JAMAICA!! BRING IT ON!!

would it be totally run of the mill weird if i said i love you for this story?
lol
it makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside=]

LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it!

Oooooooooooo. It's so good.
This story is amazing, you're a very, very talented writer.

It's dangerous to be around me when I see this story got updated, I get that excited. You are seriously a fantastic writer! I can't think of enough adjetives that describe how wonderful this story is.

I just finished reading this story and I am in love!!
You are a very talented writer!

*new reader*
I spent my all afternoon reading your story and I completely love it! :D
I can't wait for the next update

*Slaps Zacky* blind. seriously.
Amazing doesn't even cover how wonderful this story is.
You are such a fantastic writer, you should publish :]