Unwanted In Wonderland - Comments

damn this chapter was fucking intense!!!!!!!!!! zacky sounded like an ass at the end, but she prolly enjoyed being able to touch him....more soon please!!

great update! get well soon :D

ooh..
omg.
the things alcohol make people do.
lols!

i think...
maybe zacky doesn't want to lose giselle as a friend?
and that's why he wanna keep their friendship purely platonic...
hmm...
idk.
lols.

<3!

I kinda feel sorry for Giselle :(
She's so head over heels for Zack that she let him do that without any qualms, just so that she could get that kinda attention from him <3
I just want Zack to realise just how much she really loves him >.<

awwwwww get better soon =]=]=]
i liked his chapter it was very funny lol =]=]

i love this story!
more?
soon?
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

Ugh!
Why can't he just dump Gena?
Gabrielle! That was a nice little slip up by Matt.
Nice update. (:

I hope you feel better soon.
xx

This story is just awesome!
and you're an amazing author!
can't wait for more!

So.. I'm hell late. I know. But you'll forgive me, because you just love my comments oh so much. Oh, and i'm not a lil crazy.. I'm flat out insane. But it's one of my best qualities!

Okay, first things first. You know I'm bummed Gena went.. but I get why she did. Kind of difficult to make it so she didnt go... but still! I loved the silent exchange between her and Gisselle in the cab.. so funny. Loved this:

“Oh I’ll cut it out,” I nodded at Matt. “I’ll cut out her heart and serve it on a sliver platter with some asparagus and a nice Chianti.” I muttered.

Reminded me of Silence Of The Lambs, Hannibal Lector.. hahaha.

The scene where Matt and Brian through her in the water was so funny... I loved how she tried to pretend she was drowning, but they didnt fall for it. It was quite amusing. But my favourite bit was this:

He reached for me and I hugged him back. Zacky held onto me and rocked me from side to side in the water, making waves as he moved me. I laughed and held him tighter.

That small part/exchange was sooooo damn sweet!! I could picture it in my head... it was like a perfect kind of couple like moment.. cept it was just missing a a sweet kiss. Gah. But you made up for that by Gisselle kissing his neck and driving Gena mad. haha.

Oh.. the dinner?! So freaking hilarious!! I'm jealous! I want to kiss Johnny!! I love how nuts the guys went over it.. the only one who didnt really care was Jimmy.. But the other three seemed as though they were ready to take Johnny outside and cut his tongue out before shoving it up his ass. I felt so bad for Johnny though when they were sharing a hug on the way back to the hotel... he's all heartbroken = (

The part where the old lady thought Brian and Gisselle were engaged was also amusing. I liked how they were both caught off guard and kept trying to correct her.. then just gave up. haha. Btw, this bit:

We just hid too much…
… two peas in a fucked up pod.

Very nice subtle referance to their conversation they shared when they were still getting to know each other way back in the early chapters. They have a very interesting relationship.. because there doesnt seem to be any sexual attraction, it's like a mental connection and emotional connection they have. It's not even like brother/sister relationship... it's something else entirely and it's really intriguing.

Selling Gena.. oh... SO FUNNY!! It's really too bad the plan didnt work out.. it would've fixed everything!! Damn her big mouth... hahaha.

But the wicked witch is gone!! YES!! I can't wait for the next one.. but you know this.

I hope my epic comment made up for my lateness = p

You're fucking amazing.
Gisselle is fucking amazing.
How the fuck do you do that?

you are truly amazing at writing.
this is my favorite story ever!

this story is pure fucking awesomeness
like people ask me if im crying cuz im holding in my laughter
please up date soon
if i knew how to give u a star
i would

this story is pure fucking awesomeness
like people ask me if im crying cuz im holding in my laughter
please up date soon
if i knew how to give u a star
i would

this story is pure fucking awesomeness
like people ask me if im crying cuz im holding in my laughter
please up date soon
if i knew how to give u a star
i would

awesome! There are no words to describe, just spent most of my afternoon reading from chapter 1 to 20 :P can't wait for the next update!

arrrrrrrr new reader and im addicted i love it more sooooooooooo please

wow!
like, wow! I mean, Giselle is good at sending Gena back home :)
I love this story! :D

all i have to say is that all's fair in love and war, and i LOVE the fact that giselle has taken that completely to heart. this story is beyond fantastic. in this update i loved how she and johnny got closer and finally forged a real friendship, and i love all the little bets she makes with brian, and i laughed more than i have in a week over that golf scene. the fact that she was such a perfect shot was too priceless. and selling gena on the black market?! genius. pure comedic genius. i can just picture her picking at her nails/ yawning/ just not giving a fuck as zacky reamed her out about selling his girlfriend for 5 grand. now i just can't wait until gena leaves and zacky and giselle are left alone, with a group of people that want them to get together... i guess we'll see... can't wait for the next update!!! <333

wow!
giselle is good. (:
but i wonder if she did the wrong thing;
by trusting dallas with the keys?

and and...
in some parts she did sounded a bit too jealous.
poor gena didn't even do anything to her. :(

I wandered upon your story and read it straight through! Took me most of the night. I absolutely love it! I can't wait to read more