Haha, yeah, I'd thought that they'd had sex until Hayley said they didn't :) Oh man, I can imagine how completely awkward that would have been, utterly cringe-worthy :S :D
yay!! i knew it was going to happen when she's like happy new years and he's like no happy birthday. i looovvvee new year kisses their the best in stories! soo i'm happy with this one. i just hope jesse won't go into one of his stupid mood swings and be like, your a mistake and i shouldn't have kissed you but maybe he won't. i think this is the climax of the story or the start of it when everything is going to go well then someone will lie or their will be a misunderstanding and they'll fight then one of them will realize hey i kinda like that person and i don't want to lose them so then they'll go get them and confess their love for them and get back together and so on. that's my guess for story but the storyline i don't know what could happen. but if you have her get back together with chase i will find you and i will slap you silly because that would be so so so stupid on her part but ya, amazing like the last 24 chapters, keep it up!
Oh wow, that was intense. Poor Georgina. And stupid Chase. Hopefully now though, Hayley and Jesse might get together? At some point in the future anyway :)
i never liked chase, i know the bad guys when i see them...and he's pretty damn bad. but i loooovvveee your stories, read the whole thing today and i just want hayley and jesse to freak'n kiss already! it's driving me crazy! lol so you better make it a damn good kiss. good writing and stuff, please update soon because i could tell by the "hey" greeting that the story is going to start to go where i've been waiting for it to go. but yes keep writing and update very very very soon please!
Yay! I really want to know why everyone hates Chase so much. I mean, obviously he was an asshole, but he must have done something beforehand for everyone to hate him.
*cough* Alex Pettyfer *cough* :3 That banner had me hooked, and then I started reading. I love this a lot, a lot!.
You write your characters well, and they don't contradict themselves. Which is easy to do with a story like this. They seem to fit well to what you'd expect them too. You don't overdo things, and you love cliffhangers, eh? Me too! :D
Woo! I was excited when I saw this was updated :) I wonder what he wants to talk to her about when she gets back to England? And he signed off their conversation with an 'x', I think it's sweet :)
This story is amazing. I just read the first chapter, but it has already got me hooked. Moreover, you're a great writer, you have talent - which I'm sure you're proud of - and that's ONE reason why I already like this story so much. The other is the plot. It's different from other stories on here. And, as I already told people a million times before, new and different things are what attract me. So guess what? I'm gonna subscribe to this ;) I'm really looking forward to what will happen next...