Highmore Manor - Comments

Well, I'm all caught up so you better update soon! Haha, love this story, waiting impatiently for some more drama, so again update soon-- love this story :-)

I've only read the first three chapters but I must say it's already amazing! You explain things so perfectly and it's very detailed. I just thought I'd comment before going back to read and catch up to your other readers. Keep writing :-)

that was so cute. and i was also excited that you updated so quickly. i'm so glad that payton and ricky were surprising her.. and that they weren't actually blowing her off! i love this.

Oh, I was so excited when I saw you had updated again so quickly :)
I've hijacked a computer so that I could read it.
Argh, I really want to know what Jesse's response is.
And I want Alex and Callie to get back together.....just because :D
Love it

i love this! it's one of my favourites by far.

Yay, she admitted that she likes him. Now all we have to wait for is his reply.
....How is he going to reply?
I hope your exams went well. :) I'm waiting for my HSC results. :S

Oh, and you know something kinda funny? I'm in England right now. :)

I think the thing that hooked me about your story is the fact that Hayleys from New Zealand =D

Oh dear, I hope that Jesse isn't going to be all smug now. I don't think that would help the situation between him and Hayley :(

haha.
This is awesome!
>.<
I can't wait for more.
*hint hint*

I love this story! That said, please don't be offended because I had to try to find things wrong but I wanted to actually follow through and give constructive criticism.

The plot is made up and written amazingly well. The characters are also pretty realistic (or I think so considering I've never been anywhere around people with this much money) but they seem like typical high school kids who just needed more parental guidance as children. The way and her Jesse always argue just gets a bit confusing at times since they're either at each other's throat or they seem like they're really close. Its just confusing to me as to how they were able to talk to each other so openly already. Also, Ryan seems a bit overly whinny, especially after she had already made it clear that she didn't want to date him (but that could just be my own personal issue b/c of how much I loved him).

I like how, with the cliff "issue" you actually sent her to a hospital and drew things out to make them more realistic since a lot of authors seem to breeze past those kinds of things. Again,t here's a whole lot more good than bad in this story. I can't wait to read more!!!

Stupid Jesse. Gah, just gah. :P
I want to know why he thinks Chase is untrustworthy.

Lol, I know how you feel. I get the same way about some of my characters :S

I actually love this. The plot and the way you've worked it out is simply amazing.
I do think it could be a tad bit better written, as there are some grammar and spelling errors. Regardless, this is great.
I hope you update soon.

Oooh, intrigue.
I think that Jesse likes Hayley a fair bit. :)
I'm glad that you have it all worked out, but I don't want it to end too soon :( I like this story :D

You're story doesn't suck. I happen to really like it!

NOOO!!! It does not suck. That happens to me too. lol
I love your story by the way....it's awesome.

Loveeeeeeee your storyyy! write faster lol.jk...sorta ;) and i loved that last bit with Camilla. but one thing-i no likey chase :( lol jesse's wayyy awesomer,and they need more alone time
<3keep it up! :)

I think that your story is very good personally. I like it very much indeed :)
And that was a surprising twist at the end, Camilla not actually liking Jesse.
Oh, and I had a go at the name thing, because I thought it might be interesting. Anywho, I think that the 'drama-queen" is Callie, the 'trouble-maker' is Chase, the 'brick wall' is Jesse and the 'bitch' is Camilla.
But now that I think again, I could be completely wrong.

Anyways, lovely update :D

goo update!
wait, can you remind me who Camilla is? Since there wasn't an update for a while I kinda forgot.
I think that maybe if you put a short description with your story that will come up on the recently updated stories page about the general idea of the story might make more people read... sometimes if a story's title isn't really explanatory, then people don't want to read it... people aren't not reading it because they think it isn't good... that isn't even possible, one: because if they don't read it they can't know if they like it or not and two: I <3 your story!

I think that it was cute :)
and that dress is gorgeous :D
It's a little like the dress I've got for my grad ball, except mine is a little simpler :)

Fiiiiiiiinally... I was starting to think you'd never post again! Great update! :-D