November 2nd, 2009 at 08:45am
i love how this story comes together (:
i read the whole thing before commenting, and it makes lots of sense.
I love it.
Great way to represent things. Not so much captured as other fan fictions. Quickly together, egotistical males.
You take a while to develop the characters, make them more down to Earth, you make the character much more visible.
younger siblings=the way to any girl's heart.
In my case, older siblings would be just as good. I've only let one guy meet my brothers. They thought he was a douche (after meeting him once!). They were right.