I've Never Lit a Match - Comments

  • danceislife

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    hahah I like her mom. She reminds me of a neighbor I had growing up.

    younger siblings=the way to any girl's heart.

    In my case, older siblings would be just as good. I've only let one guy meet my brothers. They thought he was a douche (after meeting him once!). They were right.
    November 2nd, 2009 at 08:45am
  • ninjaturtle-tori

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    i love how this story comes together (:
    i read the whole thing before commenting, and it makes lots of sense.
    I love it.
    Great way to represent things. Not so much captured as other fan fictions. Quickly together, egotistical males.
    You take a while to develop the characters, make them more down to Earth, you make the character much more visible.
    November 1st, 2009 at 11:19pm
  • steady as the stars

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    I LOVE YOUR UPDATE!

    :]
    November 1st, 2009 at 10:57pm
  • Sore Winner

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    Cliché as it sounds, Layla’s words took a little bit of my torn heart with them.
    poor Alex :(
    is it possible Layla is lying to herself and we a;l know she likes Alex too?
    hmm... i like her mom, she knows alot :)
    im likey this story :D
    November 1st, 2009 at 10:52pm
  • danceislife

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    ooooooo.

    So you should post the rest ;)
    October 26th, 2009 at 08:04am
  • Spread-the-Rumors

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    I think I missed an update or two...anyway, it was great to know what's going on in her mind!
    October 26th, 2009 at 04:40am
  • stands-in-the-rain

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    Very interesting,
    Love it
    keep it up!!
    cant wait to read more
    October 26th, 2009 at 12:13am
  • decadent

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    jesus christ when the fuck is layla going to hook up with alex? it's about time already. he can take her virginity and it will all be fluffy dreams and pink pillows and sweet and nice and everybody's happy.

    anyway, thank you for making jack grope "me." sadly you were mistaken about me being "extremely pretty," tall and having great boobs :( doesn't matter, though! is fiction!
    October 25th, 2009 at 11:36pm
  • danceislife

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    Alex is so sleezy. Gosh. Boobs really aren't that great. Maybe that's because I'm a girl. And I'm not interested in girls.

    What is little miss Layla doing?!?!?! She's kinda shoving it out there.

    They need to be locked in a closet (together!)or something. FAST.
    October 8th, 2009 at 02:57am
  • stands-in-the-rain

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    Love it!
    Great update! <3
    Can't wait to read more ;)
    October 7th, 2009 at 05:08am
  • Michellee.

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    just read it, love it
    subscribed ^^
    update soon! (:
    October 6th, 2009 at 07:03am
  • Spread-the-Rumors

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    I feel bad for layla because of all the guys & can't wait for her next pov.
    ..I want to know what she's thinking.

    Great update!
    October 6th, 2009 at 04:21am
  • decadent

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    i would love to write you a long comment about how and why i love this story, but i can't force the words out of me. just know i loved it enough to make you a banner, that should say enough : )
    September 24th, 2009 at 02:05pm
  • SoWrongItzBritt

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    AHHHH,
    Jillllllo!
    This = LOVE!
    AH! Finally! He kissed her!!!
    ah, rawr. I have no words to describe my love for this story, deaaaar!
    <3!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 22nd, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • SignalFire

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    Me likey!

    I've just read the whole thing from start to finsh and I've subscribed
    I love the relationship she has ith the guys but Brant needs to mess up so Alex can come to her rescue and then they can live happiliy ever after =]
    September 21st, 2009 at 10:06pm
  • stands-in-the-rain

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    I love it!
    I love layla's interaction with the guys and how they are so protective of her
    Very creative!!
    Update soon and I will love you forever!
    September 21st, 2009 at 06:41am
  • Truth About Fiction

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    I'm mad at you. Seriously. Update, please.
    ...
    This is so awkward for me, since I NEVER read band fics... So if that means anything to you, ya know... *Ahem* Anyway, hope you get five comments or whatever soon... I'd really like an update...
    September 20th, 2009 at 10:40pm
  • K H A L E E S I;;

    K H A L E E S I;; (200)

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    Cause I luff you and this story, here's another comment love.
    Amazing Chapter. <3
    September 20th, 2009 at 10:00pm
  • Sore Winner

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    i love it.
    they kissed haha :D
    whats gonna happen nexxt? :P
    September 20th, 2009 at 09:43pm
  • SoWrongItzBritt

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    dear jillo,
    you are the most amazing writer in the history of writes/authors/whale watchers/... idontknow!
    ANYWHO!
    That was a LOVELY chapter. and youre reading over my shoulder!! HI JILLY!
    Okay lets go for a walk around the block and take really awesome pictures. YES!?!?!?!
    YES!
    okay, guess what. youre silly.
    and not really reading it anymore.
    okay,
    goodbye/

    SUBSTANCE.
    September 8th, 2009 at 09:35pm