I really love this. Your writing is seriously fab (I'm not really good at compliments, forgive me?). It sorta makes my day when I see it's been updated :)
Did you seriously say that you hated this chapter?! MAH GAWD WOMAN WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU? I seriously love your writing, it's halarious and fantastic and smart and it makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside. Update soon?
Hey im a comment swapper, ive just read the fast chapter and i have to say you are clearly an amazing writer! you have great attention to detail and just have a way of drawing a reader in and instantly capturing their attention. Its just basically WOW.
Hello! Amazing story, I thoroughly enjoyed it. Your style of writing is amazing, and I loved your description of everything. It made it all that more believable. I cannot wait to see where this goes, so excited! Once again, this is a fantastic piece of work and I'm looking forward to reading future chapters!
This is so cute. Your writing style is beyond flawless and I'm so jealous of your way with words. I love how you get into emotions and dot leave any loose ends at the end of your paragraphs. Keep writing!:3
This is so cute. Your writing style is beyond flawless and I'm so jealous of your way with words. I love how you get into emotions and dot leave any loose ends at the end of your paragraphs. Keep writing!:3
The writing in this is SO GOOD! I'm so jealous! I wish I could write like you! The details that you use in describing the characters (especially Kris) paint a very vivid mental picture. The party was described beautifully too!
I don't think I actually have anything to say against this story! The font is a little bit small, but that's okay because I can zoom on my computer. Also I have pretty bad eyesight :P
Keep this story going! It's got a really nice feel to it and I can see a great plot forming!
Again, very well written story! Although I do not have any idea who the story is actually about is is very interesting. I kind of wish you had a bit of a summary on the first page but other then that, I really enjoyed reading the start of this story, it is impeccably written as all your stories seem to be :) Great job, keep it up! :D
"He sort of acted like a big, gangly seven-year-old with a drinking problem." I absolutely LOVE this description of Jack. I started smiling like crazy once I read it.
In addition to that, I enjoyed how each member of the band had something to say to Layla when they met up. Although it's Alex-centric, Jack, Rian, and Zack all contributed in encouraging her to join them on tour.
As I've told you before, I'm really eager to read more from you!
"He sort of acted like a big, gangly seven year old with a drinking problem." I am currently literally physically APPLAUDING you for that line. Anywhooo, fantastic writing. You got skills, girl!
Hey! I just realized who's story I was commenting on! Wonderful, this is beautiful, flowing smoothly and your vocabulary is brilliant. You can definitely count on me reading this one forever, because it is totally down my alley. 208 comments, 2 chapters?
Yet again, I absolutely adore this update. I'm really enjoying the complexity of Kris and Layla's relationship. Although he's a bit pushy, Kris is at least straightforward with his intentions and admits (at least to himself) that he's intimidated by his girlfriend's musical talent.
On another note, you add links on mibba like this: [url=INSERT LINK ADDRESS HERE]TEXT THAT YOU'D LIKE TO LINK[/url]