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  • Bluecaty15

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    i love it, i can't wait for you to update again soon!!!
    Please do so, and you can't end it so soon! Or are you going to make a prequel, like her falling in love with another and Edward getting all jealous and everything!!
    November 12th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • death_becomes_me

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    Please update
    I love this story
    July 25th, 2010 at 04:44pm
  • MeetMeInNeverland

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    You kept the characters how they are in the books well, its a really cool idea :)
    July 24th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • celestial_royalty

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    AHH!!! THIS IS SO FUCKING AWESOME!!! It's the first story I've ever liked Renesmee in, so I give you full credit for making her incredible. I still really want Aubrey to end up with Edward- I have a first-come-first-serve policy in my mind, so Edward belongs to her. Bella can die or something, I don't know but Edward and Aubrey belong together. Seriously. The vamps came in at a great time...I hope Frank will indeed stay in the story. I really do love it. I did find a couple odd errors though...

    ch9~~ "Not quite yet, Frank still hasn't decided how to tell Frank."

    ch25~~ I saw Eva become impatient...

    Isn't her step-mom's name Lisa? Or was there something else?

    I LOVE THE STORY PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE AND THEN MAKE AUBREY END UP WITH EDWARD!! *clicks the subscribe button five million times*
    June 17th, 2010 at 10:58am
  • Famous Friend.

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    @domious- That means a lot to me, you have no idea, and I've been trying very hard to finish the chapter but I always change something and I end up erasing everything and writing it again. I just need to make up my mind because I seriously don't know how to end it. I'm torn between two endings.
    April 18th, 2010 at 02:57am
  • domious

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    You can't just stop this! It was right at the end, I need to know what happens with the story! You should keep going, maybe make a sequal ;) !! Seriously, this was so cool. Very Original too! This was all after Nessie was born and everything. I never read a story like this, they're all the same. The had to kill off Bella, or it was before the wedding, etc. But yours was friggen amazing !!! And I don't even like Twilight, so yeah thats saying something! That I like this a lot !
    April 16th, 2010 at 06:16am
  • SynersEscape

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    oh and do Edward and Aubrey get back together? please tell meeeeee
    March 3rd, 2010 at 03:08am
  • SynersEscape

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    aww c'mon... u cant just leave it like that, i think someone needs to update ASAP! lol
    March 3rd, 2010 at 03:07am
  • StiltzScreamsRemedy

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    Oh! Update please? I'm loving the plot of the story & I can't wait to see what happens next!
    November 9th, 2009 at 12:06am
  • Famous Friend.

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    ^ ahaha.
    Well I still haven't figured out if it's going to be the last capter, but if someone does happen to die, it will be an amazing and unforgettable death, I promise.

    And sorry it's taking me so long but I really want to make sure I write the right thing.
    November 5th, 2009 at 12:27pm
  • Mushii.Massacre

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    Awesomeeee!!
    If someone dies (which i think your gonna do) make them die all bad ass!
    lmfao.
    Or dont let them die...your choice of course :)
    *cough*badass*cough*

    *MUSHIi
    November 5th, 2009 at 04:15am
  • vampyrate

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    Looking forward to the next chapter.
    October 28th, 2009 at 07:17am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    hm...
    October 23rd, 2009 at 05:10am
  • Broken_Elli

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    This is awesome =)
    You can't end it =O it's really really good!!
    ~*~
    October 15th, 2009 at 09:34pm
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    ooo.... I wonder what the idea is!
    October 9th, 2009 at 07:34am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    awsomeness!
    October 1st, 2009 at 12:21am
  • chick-flick

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    Haha, thank the gods for starbucks! Or we wouldn't be getting any chapters of this.
    September 30th, 2009 at 11:12pm
  • BreeVixen

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    I abolutley love this story.
    Please update soon : )
    September 26th, 2009 at 03:46pm
  • VengeanceXChickX

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    Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
    September 26th, 2009 at 12:32am
  • DxJenie

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    I'm so happy the story has been updated
    http://www.mibba.com/data/board-smilies/clap.gif
    September 22nd, 2009 at 03:47am