i love it, i can't wait for you to update again soon!!! Please do so, and you can't end it so soon! Or are you going to make a prequel, like her falling in love with another and Edward getting all jealous and everything!!
AHH!!! THIS IS SO FUCKING AWESOME!!! It's the first story I've ever liked Renesmee in, so I give you full credit for making her incredible. I still really want Aubrey to end up with Edward- I have a first-come-first-serve policy in my mind, so Edward belongs to her. Bella can die or something, I don't know but Edward and Aubrey belong together. Seriously. The vamps came in at a great time...I hope Frank will indeed stay in the story. I really do love it. I did find a couple odd errors though...
ch9~~ "Not quite yet, Frank still hasn't decided how to tell Frank."
ch25~~ I saw Eva become impatient...
Isn't her step-mom's name Lisa? Or was there something else?
I LOVE THE STORY PLEASE HURRY AND UPDATE AND THEN MAKE AUBREY END UP WITH EDWARD!! *clicks the subscribe button five million times*
@domious- That means a lot to me, you have no idea, and I've been trying very hard to finish the chapter but I always change something and I end up erasing everything and writing it again. I just need to make up my mind because I seriously don't know how to end it. I'm torn between two endings.
You can't just stop this! It was right at the end, I need to know what happens with the story! You should keep going, maybe make a sequal ;) !! Seriously, this was so cool. Very Original too! This was all after Nessie was born and everything. I never read a story like this, they're all the same. The had to kill off Bella, or it was before the wedding, etc. But yours was friggen amazing !!! And I don't even like Twilight, so yeah thats saying something! That I like this a lot !
^ ahaha. Well I still haven't figured out if it's going to be the last capter, but if someone does happen to die, it will be an amazing and unforgettable death, I promise.
And sorry it's taking me so long but I really want to make sure I write the right thing.
:D Awesomeeee!! If someone dies (which i think your gonna do) make them die all bad ass! lmfao. Or dont let them die...your choice of course :) *cough*badass*cough*
Please do so, and you can't end it so soon! Or are you going to make a prequel, like her falling in love with another and Edward getting all jealous and everything!!