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  • BlackMorphine

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    Que história... maravilhosa. Realmente! Houve um momento em que eu realmente acreditei que Jasmine ficaria com Zacky, e não com Matt. E, Deus! Matt agindo como um getleman, Hollie sendo uma verdadeira vadia... E Zacky! Eu imaginei que ele nutria sentimentos por ela, ou que ele a xingava por ciúmes e... Lendo, eu pensei em abandonar a história porque parecia que Matt realmente ficaria com Hollie, e pela primeira vez atingiu um pedaço em minha alma, quebrando-me. Nunca uma história fez-me chorar tanto quanto Eternal Triangle. Obrigada por escrevê-la <3
    June 17th, 2013 at 02:49am
  • VengeanceIsMine

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    So I finally am able to finish Reading this and im kinda disappointed... only cause it ended!!! Lol I loved this story !! Your an amazing writer and keep things interesting ! this story was kickass :) looove it !!!
    February 15th, 2013 at 06:56am
  • frerardlives

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    wow. i just came across this story and it was amazing! my feelings were everywhere and at the end i actually got a feeling of hurt and sadness that it was over but it was such a good ending. you are an amazing writer, and this story will forever be one of my favorites
    October 24th, 2012 at 11:11pm
  • Synful Shadows

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    I realize that this was written a couple of years ago, but I can't not comment on this. I came across this through my news feed after someone recommended it, and had to read it. This story has consumed the last 3-4 days of my life. The emotions in this. Damn. I've come across very few stories, both internet fics and actually published books, that have made me feel like this story did. It's so intense in the best way possible, and I loved this so much. The story line was great. It's different from most fanfics, and it actually kept my interest, obviously. You're a fantastic writer, and I'm going to start reading your other fics. I just loved this so much!
    October 22nd, 2012 at 05:38am
  • Angel of Vengeance

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    You are one amazing writer and I enjoyed this story immensely. It took me longer than normal, but I still enjoyed it a lot. I have Angel to thank for introducing me to your writing!! I'll definietly be checking out your other stuff too!!
    December 26th, 2010 at 11:53am
  • AriStarshine

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    Wow! I have to say that you are REALLY good at writing!
    Usually, I read books for meaningful and well constructed stories and internet stuff ( blogs, quizilla/ mibba etc.) for fun and a good laugh but your story just doesn't fit into this!
    I'm not sure, but i think you wrote some thousand pages and not a word was too much!(and I didn't see even one grammatical/ typing fault, wich is absolutely rare ;) )
    You planned the whole story very well, not rushing to the "juicy" stuff ( like Holly and her big mouth) and gave the characters "suitables" reactions, not like "we leaved the day after returning from camping and got married at Vegas and have 13 kidz" things you see around!
    Perfect, I loved it!!
    November 16th, 2010 at 06:55pm
  • The_Used

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    I just finished reading the last chapter and it brought a tear to my eye. I love this story so much I swear I'll read the whole thing again and again and will never get tired of it. I loved all the characters, even when Zacky was an asshole but then again, I loved to hate him haha.

    It's a very well written story, an inspiring story and just an awesome story all over. I loved every second of it and as I said before, I'll definately read the whole thing again and again.

    I'm not kidding when I say you should write books. You have the talent and the imagination for it. I loved this story from the first time I laid eyes on it and I knew I'd love all your other stories as well and god was I right!

    It saddens me that this story is now over but the ending is worth it and I think you couldn't have end it in a more perfect way.

    Without a doubt, one of the best stories I've ever read and I'm also putting books in there. This story kicks the asses of every books I ever read. I hope you write for a long time. I'm sure as hell gonna continue reading all your stories.

    You're the best ^_^ xoxox
    July 6th, 2010 at 05:14pm
  • zackyvravageme

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    this story is AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    June 27th, 2010 at 03:59am
  • Riot89

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    WOW!!!! I think this was the best story I've ever read!!!!
    June 25th, 2010 at 07:57pm
  • ZV's Harlot

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    Hooray! Standing ovation!!! Kudos to you woman, it was a wonderful, well written story.
    June 13th, 2010 at 06:11am
  • Killer_Cupcake!

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    You made me laugh so many times throughout this chapter and I'm very sad to see the end of it
    June 12th, 2010 at 10:07pm
  • kiss my sas

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    oh my god! I CANT BELIEVE ITS OVER!
    man, i am going to admit, im teary about this!
    the way you finished it all was so bloody perfect!
    they got married, and everyone was all happy and loving and gah!
    it was beautiful!

    the wedding seemed to go off without a hitch. nothing but the best for these two amazing characters you continually wrote with perfection.
    friendships were mended and seemed like they will stay that way foREVer, which is nothing but perfect for the story
    all song choices seemed to fit like puzzle pieces, especially 'Love Song' by the Cure in the car scene.
    and my gosh, i have never loved Johnny more that when he set up their room and was continually making grabs for Jaz, even on her weeding day!

    this story will remain foREVer in my heart. it is one of my favourite stories, not just on Mibba, but in my life, along with LvL on the soul point that they are what lead us to meet and become friends.
    im upset that it has come to an end, but i loved how you finished it off, timing perfect, every word amazing!
    honey, you have a real gift, one that so many are jealous of!
    xxoo
    Sassy
    June 12th, 2010 at 01:16pm
  • RockOut

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    Thank you for giving this story an ending!! It was absolutely amazing and im happy to see how you wanted the story to be. Great job! :-)
    June 11th, 2010 at 06:31am
  • Lady_Dee11

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    As sad as I am to see it end, but i love the ending it was perfect. Great story all around, you did a really great job!
    June 10th, 2010 at 08:42am
  • Princess Plague

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    WOW that was just amazing and pure brilliance :O I'm in awe here... I know I shouldn't be I mean it's you writing this but wow I so love this story... I do admit there's gonna be a little moment here cause I'm gonna miss this story but I know I can always read it over and over again =D I really love this story, you did amazing and you should be proud of yourself =D
    this is the cutest story ever and I can't get enough of awing over it...
    and you made me cry happy tears here haha not many people have been able to do that.... haha
    June 9th, 2010 at 11:20pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    amazing ending! I'm so glad they got married!
    so bummed it's over but looking forward to your new story!
    June 9th, 2010 at 09:23am
  • SynnerSaynt

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    I remember when you first started this story and I fell head-over-heels in love with this story.
    And it is bittersweet. How detailed and dedicated to your writing seperates you from others, my dear.
    I absolutely loved the wedding ceremony! I would say Brian's speech, the Garter moment and the happy couple at home were my favorite parts.
    I'm so glad you wrote this story and I can't wait to read more great stories from you, hun!
    June 9th, 2010 at 07:53am
  • moviemaniac888

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    aww. I loved the epilogue! Everything turned out the way it should. :D

    I'm so happy that Matt and Jaz got married, She and Zacky are on great terms and everyone is happy and enjoying life.

    I especially liked the scene with the garter, that scene made me chuckle so much...perfect song choice for that too. <3

    I also loved how Johnny was joking with Matt and getting him all riled up about Jaz and Amy. hehe.

    Excellent story dear. I truly loved it, and although I am sad to see it go I am happy to see how their story ends. Cannot wait to read more of your stories. I love your writing and I'll be checking out 'Happily Ever After,' so I'll be around. ;D
    June 9th, 2010 at 04:40am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    I'm soo happy for the characters!! Really I am. The story is amazing. It made me laugh and cry at all the right parts. I wish I found it sooner so I could have commented so much more. This story is amazing. =D
    June 9th, 2010 at 03:50am
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Aww, I loved this chapter! You did an amazing job with this story, and you should definitely be proud of it, dear. It was wonderful and seriously one of my favorites on this site. I'm going to miss this story, but I'm glad to see that they were able to have their happy ending. Nicely done, dear!
    June 9th, 2010 at 03:21am