Eternal Triangle - Comments

  • I'm glad to see that you were able to update! That was one very long, but very good, update! Jaz and Matt are just so freakin' cute together. They make me all smiley and stuff. I swear, if you were to see me right now I would have the goofiest smile on my face, like whenever I think about Brian. Hahaha. See? Having them finally together and being all cute makes me that happy!

    I loved the update and I am lookin' forward to the epilogue!
    April 17th, 2010 at 11:16pm
  • 75 pages was worth it... ( i just got caught smiling cause of this chapter) hahaha You make me want to find a best friend like matt and be in love with him forever!!!!! thank you for updating... it actually made my day!!!!
    April 17th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • Seventy five pages?
    That is insane.
    But worth it (:
    April 17th, 2010 at 10:46pm
  • ohhh myy god
    love this
    *subscribes*
    April 17th, 2010 at 10:44pm
  • I'm glad you managed to update! I loved the very long chapter! =D
    Jaz & Matt are perfect for each others!
    I'm looking forward to see what happens in the epilogue! :)
    April 17th, 2010 at 06:46pm
  • Sorry it took me so long to freakin' comme on this.

    First you know how I feel about this story. I LOVE IT! the chapter was absolutely amazing and sexy and definately, definately hot!

    I can't wait for the next update. Matt seems like such a sweet guy and Jaz is the perfect girl for him :)

    Cannot wait to read more of this. It was amazing!
    March 2nd, 2010 at 07:02pm
  • I know it's been a while since I've commented (has it? idk) and I'm commenting now. Their date was utterly amazing and romantic, I think that's way Jasmine has always dreamed it would be. You depicted everything so wonderfully, and I love the chemistry between them. Since they already know each other so well, they did not have to go through that whole awkward silence during dinner. It was really cute.

    As for the sex, well, that was steamy. It was the passionate "I've always wanted you" kind, because they always have wanted each other. I'm still happy Matt came to his senses and asked her out, and that Jasmine's finally getting what she wants. I want to see how all this turns out in the end. I hope good.

    Looking forward to the next chapter, as always

    -Gina
    February 15th, 2010 at 09:57pm
  • This story was someones reccomendation sometime this week, and I am so happy it was. Ilove this. The writing style is so good and I could actually feel her emotions. Its beautiful<3
    January 30th, 2010 at 01:08pm
  • This story is absolutely amazing. I was hooked from the the first chapter all the way to the last chapter. I’m so glad that Matt finally realized his feeling for Jasmine and that they are perfect for each other. Those two complete each other and I’m so glad that they are finally a couple. Amazing work and I can’t wait for the next chapter.
    January 28th, 2010 at 07:09pm
  • It was a lovely chapter! ^_^ Sorry it took me so long to finish it!

    After all that drama to get so quiet and serene chapter... I was all the time waiting to something dramatic to happen, like something bad! o.O Of course, I'm freaking happy it didn't, I didn't want anything to ruin their perfect date!

    Perfect it indeed was! <3

    Matt was such a gentleman, yet he had his quirky ways... haha, he made me crack up more than once with his remarks... Of course, I'm still defiant Zacky-supporter, but oh well. I suppose Matt will have to do. I'm just teasing you, Danni-dear! ;]

    One thing I love about your writing (you already know this) is how it just flows with a steady calm pace forwards... It doesn't rush, you can just sit and relax when you read it.

    I'm really happy these two silly persons finally got their other halves... They had waited for long enough.

    Can't wait for the last chapters!

    oh, and I'm very grateful you have written this EPIC piece of fiction. thank you!
    January 27th, 2010 at 11:10pm
  • And I believe we can all let out a big sigh of relief for chapter 25! They have finally gotten together and I've been waiting for this since the very beginning. I thought it was a lovely chapter, you did a fantastic job and I'm still madly in love with this story, so I hope another update comes out shortly! <3333
    January 22nd, 2010 at 11:47pm
  • okay so I've been meaning to comment totally touroghly forever now but I never get around to do it so I better just do it now while work is kinda dead...

    Anyway... this story has to be one of my favorite stories of all time =D there's just something so intense and awesome about the reallity you have in your stories and how hard you work on keeping it completely real and belivable, that's one of the things I love about ALL your stories...

    Another is the intense feeling and the way you capture me, as a reader, to never ever stop reading and when I'm foced to stop I'm frustrated and can get annoyed cause I just wanna read more and more and more... I never ever wanna stop reading your stories and when the chapters are over I'm like "NOOOOOO I NEEEED MOOOOORE"

    Yet another thing I love about your stories and what I look up to is the attention to details, I love the way you make every single image so clear and so vivid thanks to the details you have. This is one thing I look up to the most when i'm writing and hope to aspire in my work one day...

    Danni you're an awesome writer and an even better friend.. I don't know where I would be without you *huggles* so you keep on being your awesome self and keep writing your awesome stories =D
    I'll be here reading them and commenting =D
    January 19th, 2010 at 12:08pm
  • Aww...they finally did the deed. Yay!!!

    I'm sad to see it end but the story has been amazing. This is one of my favorite stories. =D
    January 18th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • That was phenominal!!!
    now i wish i could spell more words so i can describe how good it was!!

    their date was SOOO cute!!
    what a perfect first date. seriously, the restaraunt, the beach...just tooooo good!

    And well wow!
    that scene was...GAH!
    you wrote it so well! the mixture of passion, love, and the fact that they are truely meant for each other came across so easily. well done love!

    i seriously cant wait for the next update...
    and the LvL update...
    AND just ALL YOUR WRITING!!!
    XD

    xxoo
    Sas
    January 18th, 2010 at 11:15am
  • one word to describe this chapter: aww. haha.

    I have no clue why I ever wanted her with Zacky now...I mean don't get me wrong I love Zacky, but Jaz is Matt's soul-mate, and if I didn't realize it before I definitely realized it after this last chapter.

    The date and intimacy was so great and extremely well written. I had a permanent smile on my face the entire time I read it. I am so happy they are finally and officially together. They make such a great couple. just...aww.

    I feel that all the lose ends are tying up, so I am sure that this story will be leaving soon, and I will be sad to see it go, but it had a good run all the same. I really enjoyed it.

    Hopefully the next chapter will be the BBQ, I have heard all the guys and Jaz talk about it and I want to see what will happen...perhaps some drama will pop Matt and Jaz's perfect bubble? I guess I will have to wait and see. Amazing update, as always. I love reading them. :D
    January 17th, 2010 at 10:01am
  • such a good chapter!!
    loved it!
    I cant wait for the next one!
    January 17th, 2010 at 04:19am
  • this chapter made me happy
    they are just so cute together
    thiscis definately one if my favorite stories
    January 17th, 2010 at 03:50am
  • You put so many emotions in that last chapter and they all blended perfectly together! You have some serious talent! Saying that I loved the update would be an understatement. It was so sexy as well. I can't wait for the next chapter!!!! =D
    ~xoxo~
    love of vengeance
    January 17th, 2010 at 01:38am
  • This chapter was more then just okay! It was phenomenal! I loved it deeply, although i am sad that this story is coming to an end though! But i am looking forward to reading new stories from you
    i can't wait for more
    <3 Michele
    January 17th, 2010 at 01:17am
  • Awesome chapter, I loved it! =]
    It was the chapter we've all been waiting for,and it was great as usual! I so look forward to the next update :)
    January 16th, 2010 at 10:53pm