Blinded by the Fights - Comments

This isn't finished is it? You shouldn't give up on it it's really good so I hope you post another chapter of something cos I'd like to know how it turned out haha x

Why does it say the story is completed? Did you give up on it? It would suck if you did. :( It's a great story :)

I like your story. It's captivating to read your descriptions of how Zayden is dealing with his loss of sight. I also think this story is just so original. I've never read anything with the same plot so it's nice to find something new.
Just a little constructive criticism: I've noticed that Caroline's fiance's name keeps changing. Every time he's mentioned he has a different name. You should work on keeping your names straight. Just a little advice for the future.
Keep writing!

hey, awesome story!!!
just wondering if u hav any images of the characters??
cant wait for the next chapter!!

ohhhh awesome!!! your back!!..sorta anyway lol i've been waiting more for this story for foreverrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

I love this story!!! keep it up! can't wait for updates. =D

I can not wait for an update!
It's a really good story so far and I love the storyline.
It's so unique
Zayden's so awsome and I love his mom and sis!
Keep up the good work!

Heh, so I've been riding for like twelve years now, so my automatic reaction to horses in writting is 'ick!'

Wait a minute, you have a stallion and mare in the same pasture? Oh goodness.

A quick thing, is in chapter 14 you linked the pictures wrong, so I can see this... "<A HREF="http://www.drjays.com/shop/G1-V74534-R375-P547782/zoo-york/biker-fleece-jacket.html">black jacket</A> and pulling down her <A HREF="http://media.kohls.com.edgesuite.net/is/image/kohls/439461?wid=230&hei=230&op_sharpen=1">tank top</A>. " Also, it'd be nice if the paragraphs were seperated by either tabs or new lines.

Lol, anyways, this story's pretty cute. I liked how she made her mom kick her out of the house, that made me chuckle. The only timing thing that seemed a bit weird was in the beginning she says she has only missed one day for the last three years or so for riding. But then as the story progresses she misses more and more due to Zay's hospital stay, her band, and school. The first is understandable of course, but one would think the other two would influence her during those three years... although I'm pretty sure not that many people would notice something trivial like that :tehe:

So yes, very cute fluffy story. :cute:

I really love this story. I always can't wait for an update. :)

Hi, This story is so cute, funny, and very different. I love it. I hope you update it soon. :)

I love this story its alot diffrent then most of the storys here update soon please! :D

LOVE the story, its TOADLY AWESOME!!!!!
lol, update soon!!!

Very, very good story. I really do love it, please update some more.

This is an amazing story, I love how unique it is and well written

OH MY RONNIE!!!!!!HE GOT CUT =(

thanx fer da update

Maybe they should hang out or seomthing,........just an idea

I would've commented sooner if I knew you updated! I didn't get an email for updates so I'm really sorry, but I'm all caught up now! =)

i really like your story cant wait to see what going to happen

*comment virginity taken*

I love it! it's totally awesome...keep writing?

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