I finished it. After reading the sequel first this cleared up a lot of things for me. Now I understand that Brian did have a right to be mad at her, but then again he should have tried to see things from her perspective.
Anyways awesome story. I can't wait for more goodness in the sequel! I wonder if Lyn and Brian will somehow get together again partially because of the kids. But she also loves Billy and Billy loves her back, but I have a feeling that Brian's feelings are also returning, maybe unknown to him. Like I said, I can't wait! XD
Bravo!! I loved it! and I can't wait for the sequel. The description already sounds delicious! I was sad that Brian just left though. And without her being able to tell him about the baby. :(
I was FINALLY able to finish reading this story and i read from chapter 19 to chapter 35 and all i have to say is WOW. I loved every word that you wrote of this story, you did such a fantastic job with it! It was about 868648364 times better than the original, had me on the edge of my seat with anticipation, and was overall very well written.
The ending was absolutely perfect for this story and it literally took my breath away because the events leading to the end all happened in such a perfect whirlwind. This story is definitely something that you should be proud of and I cannot wait to read the sequel.
And by the way, the title of the sequel is one of the best titles i've ever come across, it's so powerful and has a great link (in terms of wordplay) to the original story's title. So excited for what's to come next by way of the sequel! Great job once again babe! <3333
hey ^^ j'ai un spécial Thanks :p lol :D la fin géniale : j'aime d'ailleur beaucoup le com' de Hell Gates ^^ ca traduit tres bien l'état d'esprit d'a peu pres tous tes lecteurs :p (jte demande pardon parce que j'ai qd mm réussi a etre mdr en lisant ce dernier chapitre.... yavait "reluctantly" dedans ^^ et je sais pas pourquoi mais je crois que ce mot me fera toujours marrer :pp quoi que la c'etait l'eclat de rire qui s'est transformé en quinte de toux XD bref, dsl d'avoir rigolé pdt ce chapitre :$) qui était d'ailleur PARFAIT !! avec le coup de Billy et le "i love you" truc XD le mec il sait meme pas que ce que Bri va faire, ca va le rendre heureux pendant environ... 15ans? :p bon, ca c'est AVANT qu'ils ne reviennent a Huntington, mais bon :) c'est déjà ca de pris ! lol ^^ je clique de suite sur le lien de la suite :p :p:p
Well... what a way to find out! Though she's silly for running away.. of course Brian wasn't gonna handle it well the second he found out... but she didnt even give her brother a chance to react. Though yeah, I can understand her being upset, of course.
Well, I really enjoyed this re-write, my dear. I think you did a wonderful job on this (as you did with the first one, too) and I can't wait to se what you're gonna do with the sequel =)
MY FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD! I COULDN'T IMAGINE A BETTER END DAMMIT! OMCG OMCG OMCG OMCG OMCGGGGGGG! That's fucking... WOOWWWWW! I cannot wait 'till the sequel will start getting updated! FUCK I'M SHOCKED! THIS IS JUST WOW. I LOVE IT SO MUCH. WO WO WOWOWOWOW! WOW. WOW. WOW. Okay I'm done.
it's something unpredictable but in the end is right i hope you had the time of your life i can imagine it now, perfect nightmare did have the time of their lives on that tour i kind of feel sad myself "that the tour is ending"
Anyways awesome story. I can't wait for more goodness in the sequel! I wonder if Lyn and Brian will somehow get together again partially because of the kids. But she also loves Billy and Billy loves her back, but I have a feeling that Brian's feelings are also returning, maybe unknown to him. Like I said, I can't wait! XD