I'm bored, so I just read all of your comments. Gees girl, you make me jealous. Anyhoo, half of the story was just given away. I've read the first maybe 5 chapters before and never got around to reading the rest (nothing personal, I'm just busy busy busy) So now I really want to read this.
I gotta say, the first few comments really pissed me off. I have no idea how people can be so mean, even if they didn't like your story. And you know how they said you switched pov's straight away, like in the first chapter?
Well they are just dumb. That was obviously Serena thinking to herself. Gees!!