Fracture - Comments

i'm actually crying (i'm pathetic i know) this was perfect.

sequel please???? :(((((((( this is great!

Probably my all time favourite het fic. I just love your writing so much!

Probably my all time favourite het fic. I just love your writing so much!

I just read this all in one sitting and it's perfect omfg???

You have a true talent(: thanks for finally updating! Never lost hope for the epilogue to come haha I'm going to miss getting updates from this story, but you ended it on a perfect note

You have a true talent(: thanks for finally updating! Never lost hope for the epilogue to come haha I'm going to miss getting updates from this story, but you ended it on a perfect note

Oh my gosh, I loved it. I cryed a few times too.. It was just beautiful.Good Job :)

AAAWWWWW IT'S OVER
This story is amazing. I love it. It's extremely well written and not like anything I've read before. The plot is wonderful and so are all of the characters. I really do love this one and hope to read more of your work soon.
This chapter was really good, aw! I'm glad Jack's back and a part of their lives now. Emily and him are so cute!
I would say to update soon, but now it's over.. hm. I really don't know what to say now. Oh well, bye, I guess! cx

I rea this entire thing a few months ago and I usually hate Hetero fics but this made me cry so hard and when I saw you updated I literally screamed. This was so awesome and such a great ending and so nice bless you

I know you haven't updated in a really long time but this story is really interesting. I read the entire thing in one night because I needed to know what happened next. I really hope that you do post an epilogue just to give the story some closure. my only suggestion would be that in your future stories try to give some of the other characters some more depth. Juliet and her friend act the exactsame way as her mother did; I'm not sure if you did that on purpose to show how alike they are but maybe give her a bit of her own personality also. And what I mean by more depth for the characters is that you might want to make your main characters more than just people in love so that readers that haven't been in love can still relate. Thanks for reading and please update.

-Miranda

I just wanna say... I'm pretty sure your readers miss you!!!! I just can't wait for the epilogue... Bleh. This was such a great story. Wherever you are, hope you're doing okay haha

Hey! I just LOVE the story and can't wait to read the epilogue

Holy jebus! Saw the update in my e-mail and was so stoked. I can't wait to see the epilogue, even though I'm sad for the end, I'm stoked as well!

Jack is such a romantic.
I really love this story, I see good things for these two and Juliet. :)

So, this story is amazing (: I love it sooo much, can't wait for the next update (:

I just stumbled across this story today and spent the last 2 hours or so catching up on all the chapters you've posted. I've gotta say that you're quite a talented writer and I'm loving the plot you've developed.

I'm so sad about the end of this story.
Buy excited to see how you make it all work.
Sequel? You should. ;D

i'll be sad to see this end but i just went back and re-read the whole thing and now i'm even more jazzed to see how you sum it all up.

Omg that was so cute cant wait for the next update xD