I should be doing homework that was due last week. But this was too good, it always is. I don't mind the lack of updates. You have a life, we all have lives. I'm sure no one expects you to update everyday. I don't know how anyone could find the time. Take your time though, meaningful work is the best work. :)
you have absolutely wonderful details in your stories, especially this one. that last scene was the greatest, can't wait for more of this lovely story.
I wanted to write to you since the beginning of this story, but I just got the chance now. And I completely forgot everything I wanted to tell you. It's insane.
So let's start with the fact that you portray Pete in such a believable way, and such a deep level, that it made me fall in love with him again. Until now, I thought he was quite arrogant and so snob at times, that I felt really let down. And honestly, I see things from a whole new perpective now(or maybe a rather old one), because, perhaps, he feels, and is, like that. I want to believe.
I guess you got my point of what a hell of a writer you are. You've got the gift, and I'd definitely reward you as the best author of mibba, from what I've read so far. It's like, your own personal oscar(:
And I take it that Pete and Sarah won't end up together, from what you once mentioned. And it's a real pity, because, oh well, they're soulmates.
So I hope you change your mind, if you want your readers happy.
I could do with an update though. Your pace is killing me:P
This story is so bittersweet for me. Because no matter what happens now, they are going to get hurt. Like, there is no easy perfect solution to let them end up happily-ever-after together.
Brilliant chapter. I've been following this story on Quizilla for a while, but I'm pretty sick of that site now, so here I am. I believe I've told you before, on Quizilla, that I think you grasp his personality amazingly well. It makes the story more enjoyable to read, when it feels more true to life. And I love Sarah - the conflict she feels every moment she's around him. It keeps you on the edge of your seat. Great writing.
So I'd be lying if I told you there wasn't a huge smile gracing my lips right now. That was beautiful, I don't want it to end. I'll be so sad when I have to say goodbye to this. :'[
that was amazing. you seem to always take the people i assume to be douche bags, and completely change my entire outlook on them. can't wait for the next one, oh and btw Team Sarah. fuck Ashlee.
Update when you can!