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  • Spread-the-Rumors

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    I'm very curious about the next chapter.

    Update when you can!
    February 16th, 2010 at 02:59am
  • MassRomantic

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    Oh my god oh my go oh my god, Sarah, I just want to hug you.
    So beautiful, as usual : )
    February 16th, 2010 at 02:41am
  • grain adloaf

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    I. NEED. To. Know. What. Happens! Its integral to my life!!
    February 15th, 2010 at 06:11pm
  • rivals are insane

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    absolutly amazing :D loved it :D
    its getting intense now, really really intense :D
    February 15th, 2010 at 10:54am
  • plug-in-baby

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    Amazincg update!! I cannot wait for more :))
    February 15th, 2010 at 05:19am
  • boycott love

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    they're two messed up people that complete each other. it's perfect. ;)
    almost over? unacceptable.
    loooooved the update. :)
    February 15th, 2010 at 04:42am
  • Much Better

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    I should be doing homework that was due last week.
    But this was too good, it always is.
    I don't mind the lack of updates.
    You have a life, we all have lives.
    I'm sure no one expects you to update everyday.
    I don't know how anyone could find the time.
    Take your time though, meaningful work is the best work. :)
    February 15th, 2010 at 03:30am
  • satellite heart

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    way to leave me hanging! also, take as long as you would like to update, its makes reading the next udate that much better.
    February 15th, 2010 at 03:08am
  • damaged_hero

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    you have absolutely wonderful details in your stories, especially this one.
    that last scene was the greatest, can't wait for more of this lovely story.
    January 12th, 2010 at 02:58am
  • Mrs.IeroWaySainthood

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    Left off on chapter four hopefully I'll catch up soon.
    January 11th, 2010 at 06:50am
  • nostradamus.

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    I wanted to write to you since the beginning of this story, but I just got the chance now. And I completely forgot everything I wanted to tell you. It's insane.

    So let's start with the fact that you portray Pete in such a believable way, and such a deep level, that it made me fall in love with him again. Until now, I thought he was quite arrogant and so snob at times, that I felt really let down. And honestly, I see things from a whole new perpective now(or maybe a rather old one), because, perhaps, he feels, and is, like that. I want to believe.

    I guess you got my point of what a hell of a writer you are. You've got the gift, and I'd definitely reward you as the best author of mibba, from what I've read so far. It's like, your own personal oscar(:

    And I take it that Pete and Sarah won't end up together, from what you once mentioned. And it's a real pity, because, oh well, they're soulmates.

    So I hope you change your mind, if you want your readers happy.

    I could do with an update though. Your pace is killing me:P
    January 10th, 2010 at 10:10pm
  • grain adloaf

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    Argh, omg! What's going to happen next?!? I NEED TO KNOW!! It's crucial to my life! :P

    This story kills me sometimes! I just need to know what happenssssss!

    Update soon!
    January 10th, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • pixiesticks650

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    This story is so bittersweet for me. Because no matter what happens now, they are going to get hurt. Like, there is no easy perfect solution to let them end up happily-ever-after together.
    January 10th, 2010 at 10:35am
  • SweetUncertainty

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    Brilliant chapter. I've been following this story on Quizilla for a while, but I'm pretty sick of that site now, so here I am. I believe I've told you before, on Quizilla, that I think you grasp his personality amazingly well. It makes the story more enjoyable to read, when it feels more true to life. And I love Sarah - the conflict she feels every moment she's around him. It keeps you on the edge of your seat. Great writing.
    January 10th, 2010 at 02:28am
  • Much Better

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    So I'd be lying if I told you there wasn't a huge smile gracing my lips right now. That was beautiful, I don't want it to end. I'll be so sad when I have to say goodbye to this. :'[
    January 10th, 2010 at 12:07am
  • Red Bandit

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    -supertacklehighfive!- that last chapter made me spazz. in a good way. i think.
    January 9th, 2010 at 11:59pm
  • plug-in-baby

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    wowww
    incredible update.
    i love pete and sarah togehter haha
    but i have a feeling they wont get to be together =[[
    cant wait for more!
    January 9th, 2010 at 08:13pm
  • satellite heart

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    that was amazing. you seem to always take the people i assume to be douche bags, and completely change my entire outlook on them. can't wait for the next one, oh and btw Team Sarah. fuck Ashlee.
    January 9th, 2010 at 07:37pm
  • Spread-the-Rumors

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    This was my favorite chapter so far, and I loved the last sentence : )
    January 9th, 2010 at 06:39pm
  • boycott love

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    Awwwww! Pete thinks they're soul mates. How adorable! ;)
    January 9th, 2010 at 05:30pm