If I Could Go Back in Time - Comments

that was an amazing story!!

I loved it. :D

five: The last part: so very true and excellent words to live by. Wondering what happened next?

four: Awesome descriptions again. Wished the Mercy had let Jenna go, but then I guess there really wouldn't have been a story or they would have met differently. Wondering what's going to happen?

three: Awesome descriptions and LOVED the mother/son parts. Wondering what's going to happen during the party? Can't wait to find out.

two: Short, but great descriptions on how the girls met. Loved the last part of this; thought it was cute and somewhat of a giggle. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

Sounds interesting. The descriptions were very detailed and excellent. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.

This has been a really good story. XD
It was a sweet ending.

Aww…what a sweet ending! Just as I knew it would be, of course. Haha. But still…good ending!

Aww, how sweet! I didn't know Jenna would be pregnant, but still…good surprise, and I'm sure they'll be very happy together! Now we need Mercy's happy ending…

While reading this chapter, why did I have the constant feeling that something would go wrong? That little Austin would feel ignored and run away, that Jami would cause trouble, that someone would back out? I don't think anything more will happen, because this seems like the end, but…

i'm in love with this story :)

i'm in love with this story :)

Yay…I knew he was gonna propose, and getting Zacky beat up was just an added bonus!

Haha…yay, I was right! :mrgreen: I'm glad Mercy isn't taking his crap. I don't think she should stay in New York forever, but just for a little while, maybe until the baby's born. Then she can be with Brian. :P

First before I comment on the latest chapter and make Jackie feel better, I realize I never responded to the cliffhanger…I bet she will find…another woman, maybe?

Now for the latest chapter. You said it wasn't gonna be Jami-hating, but it seems that way so far. Poor Jami. I hope whatever you said was gonna happen to her that isn't Jami-hating happens soon. On the brighter note, Jenna and Austin can now get married, and little A can be happy, too!

:) Aw.... Thats so cute! They do make a happy family- the way that I see it. :D
SO CUTE!

Go Team Brian! Team Zacky is so gonna lose…

Well, it was short, but that's okay since you were sick. I'm glad Jenna and Austin are together…now I'm anxious for what happens to Jami and Mercy! I'm about to start twitching from need of story…

:D I really liike your story! Its dramatic. :) lol. but yeah. I wonder whats going to happen between Zacky and Marcy? Or Austin and Jenn? Wonder.....
But yeah, love the story.

I think it's Brian now, cuz I highly doubt Zacky will help Mercy out. So there's my two cents.

Please write the rest ASAP, both of you!!