Mental Fiction Follows Me - Comments

I just wrote the longest comment in the world and then in true fashion to myself, I deleted it all on accident without saving anything. I will sum things up. Basically, you are amazing, hun, and your skilled level of writing almost rivals the amazingess of your person. I'm not even exaggerating, It's what, almost 7 years later and I can tell you it holds up. I remember when waiting for story updates (especially yours, especially this one) was my entire LIFE. I canceled plans to read these stories! And just like then, I'm staying up late to reread them all again. Because I need them. So many years later, and they still offer an escape window into a vividly described foreign reality where I can be somewhere else for a while. And even though it may be a little crowded, you have truly made Syd's head where a I want to be. I love you and I love this story!

I have read this so many times and when I get to the part where she leaves I always think that she is going to get pregnant and not have to go. Then i just kinda feel sad because I know it wont happen

This is such a good story. I love rereading it :)
5/5 stars!!!

I love the story. It`s amazing.

Lovely.
:]
haha.
I'm sad it ended, but new story time.
WOOT!

Not the end!!!
-starts crying-
Dx

It definitly did NOT disapoint I loved it so much I am happy she is pregnant now and that she has no more nightmares, I also adore the fact that you didnt drop Jillian and Sage cause I thought they were an awesome addition to the story. Well I cant wait for your next story!

yay seth sanders xD
and that was a cute wedding!!!
LOVE LVOE LOVED IT TARA!!!

I'm crying :') But I'm very happy because this is the perfect ending for a great story!
Ow the kids are just great *.*

Gosh I don't know if I can put into words how much I loved this story. It was truly amazing, and this ending was perfect. Her and Jimmy are going to be amazing parents and all the girls are going to be so happy. Its perfect...I was almost in tears. I will miss this story though...

i LOVED this story soooo much xD

I think that I've explained so many times in the comments and to you personally just how much I love this story. I meant every word. But this ending, was so amazing. It made literally let out this breath I didn't know I was holding, with the last two parts. It was absolutely beautiful. So well done, Tara.

"Mental fiction follows me..." I felt Jimmy smile against the side of my neck before softly whispering the last line.

"Show me what it's like to be set free."

(L)

Aw! I'm crying too. Lol, right when she walked out of the tent, tears started coming. It was great! <3

Aw that was the sweetest ending ever!
Whooo I get to get married to johnny! lol.
A mini Jimmy and Mini Syd...I don't know how good that is lol. jk jk

This story was absoultly amazing and you're such an amazing writer. I love how you wrote this. It was just simply amazing!

Amazing end.
I'm crying 'cause I just don't want it to be over.
It was amazingly written and I loved how many complications there were,
before they could actually be together.
Beautiful story.

So sad it's over, I was always looking forward to reading this story.
It was a wonderful ending tho xD
I love how she's pregnant at the end!! I'm a sucker for kids...
anywho I plan to read your new story, going to check it out right now. :)
and one more thing, if I haven't already told you, you are an amazing writer. bye for now.

Awww! Like always, I loved it. Thank you for FINALLY telling me the name lol. I'm sad that it's over, but I'm happy with the ending. XP

if you only knew how much i'm smiling right now.
i love when stories end with a wedding. its so cute. xDDD
i loved this story as you should know.
oh and thanks for letting me get married to my personal human leopard. (:

I'm finally caught up!!!
hahaha. aww, its so cute how she's a new mommy.
and i think it would be really eye-opening to see your own memorial, very insightful.
Anyway, i love this. and i don't want to see this end...today...either! but you'll do a kick ass job of closing it, of that im sure of. (:

Yes it was perfect just perfect I love that you brought Dannys wife back into it and that Syd finally got to go see her memorial