Homepage › Stories › Mental Fiction Follows Me › Comments

Mental Fiction Follows Me - Comments

  • Lady_Plague_6661

    Lady_Plague_6661 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    I just wrote the longest comment in the world and then in true fashion to myself, I deleted it all on accident without saving anything. I will sum things up. Basically, you are amazing, hun, and your skilled level of writing almost rivals the amazingess of your person. I'm not even exaggerating, It's what, almost 7 years later and I can tell you it holds up. I remember when waiting for story updates (especially yours, especially this one) was my entire LIFE. I canceled plans to read these stories! And just like then, I'm staying up late to reread them all again. Because I need them. So many years later, and they still offer an escape window into a vividly described foreign reality where I can be somewhere else for a while. And even though it may be a little crowded, you have truly made Syd's head where a I want to be. I love you and I love this story!
    June 2nd, 2016 at 08:46am
  • Waking_The_Dead

    Waking_The_Dead (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I have read this so many times and when I get to the part where she leaves I always think that she is going to get pregnant and not have to go. Then i just kinda feel sad because I know it wont happen
    October 30th, 2013 at 10:56pm
  • Waking_The_Dead

    Waking_The_Dead (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    This is such a good story. I love rereading it :)
    5/5 stars!!!
    April 30th, 2013 at 04:50am
  • VendettaMarie

    VendettaMarie (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Canada
    I love the story. It`s amazing.
    February 11th, 2010 at 03:15pm
  • Hannahdoll

    Hannahdoll (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    United States
    Lovely.
    :]
    haha.
    I'm sad it ended, but new story time.
    WOOT!
    November 2nd, 2009 at 07:06pm
  • ikickshins

    ikickshins (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    102
    Location:
    Neutral Zone
    Not the end!!!
    -starts crying-
    Dx
    October 31st, 2009 at 07:07am
  • Sydz Snickers

    Sydz Snickers (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    It definitly did NOT disapoint I loved it so much I am happy she is pregnant now and that she has no more nightmares, I also adore the fact that you didnt drop Jillian and Sage cause I thought they were an awesome addition to the story. Well I cant wait for your next story!
    October 31st, 2009 at 04:14am
  • VengeanceIsMine

    VengeanceIsMine (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    yay seth sanders xD
    and that was a cute wedding!!!
    LOVE LVOE LOVED IT TARA!!!
    October 30th, 2009 at 07:31pm
  • BlueDreams

    BlueDreams (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    Portugal
    I'm crying :') But I'm very happy because this is the perfect ending for a great story!
    Ow the kids are just great *.*
    October 30th, 2009 at 06:31pm
  • The.Escape.Artist

    The.Escape.Artist (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United States
    Gosh I don't know if I can put into words how much I loved this story. It was truly amazing, and this ending was perfect. Her and Jimmy are going to be amazing parents and all the girls are going to be so happy. Its perfect...I was almost in tears. I will miss this story though...
    October 30th, 2009 at 07:04am
  • MsSynnieVengeance

    MsSynnieVengeance (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    38
    Location:
    United States
    i LOVED this story soooo much xD
    October 30th, 2009 at 06:35am
  • lindsaylunacy

    lindsaylunacy (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    33
    Location:
    Canada
    I think that I've explained so many times in the comments and to you personally just how much I love this story. I meant every word. But this ending, was so amazing. It made literally let out this breath I didn't know I was holding, with the last two parts. It was absolutely beautiful. So well done, Tara.

    "Mental fiction follows me..." I felt Jimmy smile against the side of my neck before softly whispering the last line.

    "Show me what it's like to be set free."

    (L)
    October 30th, 2009 at 05:59am
  • Vampi23A7X

    Vampi23A7X (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Aw! I'm crying too. Lol, right when she walked out of the tent, tears started coming. It was great! <3
    October 30th, 2009 at 04:03am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

    xxxJimmysullivanxx (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    32
    Location:
    United States
    Aw that was the sweetest ending ever!
    Whooo I get to get married to johnny! lol.
    A mini Jimmy and Mini Syd...I don't know how good that is lol. jk jk

    This story was absoultly amazing and you're such an amazing writer. I love how you wrote this. It was just simply amazing!
    October 30th, 2009 at 03:30am
  • Lynnie Vicious

    Lynnie Vicious (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    Amazing end.
    I'm crying 'cause I just don't want it to be over.
    It was amazingly written and I loved how many complications there were,
    before they could actually be together.
    Beautiful story.
    October 30th, 2009 at 01:19am
  • RAWR!_DEATHBAT

    RAWR!_DEATHBAT (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Canada
    So sad it's over, I was always looking forward to reading this story.
    It was a wonderful ending tho xD
    I love how she's pregnant at the end!! I'm a sucker for kids...
    anywho I plan to read your new story, going to check it out right now. :)
    and one more thing, if I haven't already told you, you are an amazing writer. bye for now.
    October 30th, 2009 at 01:16am
  • Synful Skittles

    Synful Skittles (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Awww! Like always, I loved it. Thank you for FINALLY telling me the name lol. I'm sad that it's over, but I'm happy with the ending. XP
    October 30th, 2009 at 12:59am
  • Lady_Plague_6661

    Lady_Plague_6661 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    if you only knew how much i'm smiling right now.
    i love when stories end with a wedding. its so cute. xDDD
    i loved this story as you should know.
    oh and thanks for letting me get married to my personal human leopard. (:
    October 30th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • Lady_Plague_6661

    Lady_Plague_6661 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    29
    Location:
    United States
    I'm finally caught up!!!
    hahaha. aww, its so cute how she's a new mommy.
    and i think it would be really eye-opening to see your own memorial, very insightful.
    Anyway, i love this. and i don't want to see this end...today...either! but you'll do a kick ass job of closing it, of that im sure of. (:
    October 29th, 2009 at 04:28pm
  • Sydz Snickers

    Sydz Snickers (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    Yes it was perfect just perfect I love that you brought Dannys wife back into it and that Syd finally got to go see her memorial
    October 29th, 2009 at 04:59am
Homepage › Stories › Mental Fiction Follows Me › Comments