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  • BlueDreams

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    I loved this chapter *.* It made me truly happy and I want Devin back cause I love him :D
    Brian's the best cousin ever! xD
    October 17th, 2009 at 01:02am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    Aw that's like the perfect way to wake up next to Jimmy.
    Love the phone call lol.
    Aw she found out about Devin and she doens't mind! Syd is freakn amazing!
    October 16th, 2009 at 08:20pm
  • katelynnjosee

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    Filler or not, chapter was amazing. =)
    October 16th, 2009 at 05:49am
  • Vampi23A7X

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    :D <3 So cuteeeee. I love it and now i am waiting for chapt 41 for Devin and Syd to meet! haha.
    October 16th, 2009 at 03:23am
  • MagicIsMyLife

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    i thot you were going to kill them!!!!! its not funny...i was crying!!!!! i love this story...keep updating!!!!!!!!!!!!
    October 16th, 2009 at 03:13am
  • Aightball

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    I'm glad she at least knows that Devin is around! I can't wait to see how they react to each other. Has JImmy told him about her?

    I'm glad, though, that she's back and she's doing well. I know that the worst is yet to come, but for now, I'm happy for them both!
    October 16th, 2009 at 02:08am
  • Synful Skittles

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    Awwwwwwww! Dude, why can't you make Devin and Syd meet sooner? This wait is going to kill me! I still love it though!
    October 16th, 2009 at 12:53am
  • ikickshins

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    Noo! You can't torture us like that.
    Syd and Devin should meet FAST. Dx
    October 16th, 2009 at 12:13am
  • The Deadliest Syn

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    awww this was a cuta and sad chapter kinda. lol
    i can't wait for Syd to meet Devin. =D
    October 16th, 2009 at 12:04am
  • foREVer an Angel

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    OMG the beginning pissed me off, but then it got really awesome. I hope you update soon. i'm so happy she's finally home with her family and soon with Jimmy
    October 15th, 2009 at 06:27am
  • lindsaylunacy

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    I cannot begin to explain how pissed off I am! I have not been getting these update e-mails!!

    I had to catch up from when Syd woke up and was with Chase and Julie, and I SO close to crying in everyone, and cried when she finally made it home. This story is so great, and the emotion in it is so overwhelming. I can't wait for her to find out about Devin.

    And I was so angry when I read about the plane crash, but laughed afterwards. You would so do something like that, you butthead.

    I love you, and I'm just so happy she's home now. This story feels so real.

    (L)
    October 13th, 2009 at 07:07am
  • The.Escape.Artist

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    I might just shoot your for that beginning. I was so freaked out!!!!!

    But the real chapter brought tears to my eyes. I'm so glad she is finally home.
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:57am
  • katelynnjosee

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    FINALLY! And the end totally makes up for the fake-out. =) Seriously love it, so glad Syd finally got home. <3
    (Happy Thanksgiving! =D).
    October 12th, 2009 at 07:23pm
  • VengeanceIsMine

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    OMG i almost screamed at what you wrote in the beginning!
    and then i was so relieved to find out it wasnt real!
    im soooo glad she is home xD
    love this!!
    October 12th, 2009 at 05:21am
  • Sydz Snickers

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    I hate you I hate you I freaking hate you! That fake part made me soooooo angry I was like WHAT THE HELL! But yeah the other parts were great and I cant wait for the end!
    October 11th, 2009 at 04:48am
  • Bitee.Me

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    Oh my god. I cried when Syd made it home. >:D
    I cannot wait for the last five chapters. :]
    October 11th, 2009 at 04:11am
  • BlueDreams

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    I'm so HAPPY!!
    She's home! *happy dance* :'D Jimmy and Syd *.* I want Devin in too, I'm sure will love him *.*
    This story is almost over but I can't wait for the next one :D
    October 11th, 2009 at 02:37am
  • Cross Out Jennifer

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    I really thought Sid was gonna die.
    Then I would have sent evil pigs after you.
    But..shes finally home!!!
    October 10th, 2009 at 09:01pm
  • Hannahdoll

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    Haha.
    Wow..
    I was like, Tara? Really?

    I'm really really glad Syd is home..
    I about cried because it's so emotional that she's finally home.
    October 9th, 2009 at 03:40pm
  • Kate Monster

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    Ahh! this is one of my favorite storys ever!! I'm sad to see it go, but I'm happy syd's finally home, and with Jimmy again :)
    October 9th, 2009 at 04:52am