But, here, I get to go more indepth in my 'analysis of Alex's writing'! What I really liked best was the flow of it all. Nothing was choppy, and it all went naturally.
Marik smirked again, leaning in so his breath tickled his new lover's ear. "Bottom or top?"
-ded- :lmfao
But, I'll end this long-winded comment by saying, again, that I really liked this. (: <3
AND LOL I'M AN ANGEL. AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. HAH.
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But, here, I get to go more indepth in my 'analysis of Alex's writing'!
What I really liked best was the flow of it all.
Nothing was choppy, and it all went naturally.
Marik smirked again, leaning in so his breath tickled his new lover's ear. "Bottom or top?"
-ded-
:lmfao
But, I'll end this long-winded comment by saying, again, that I really liked this. (: <3
AND LOL I'M AN ANGEL.
AHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.
HAH.
comment virginity. Winwinwin.