Forbidden Temptation - Comments

i loved the story, you did amazing. keep up the good work!

oh my goodness when seth thought ' I couldn't yell at carlisle. I would be like stabbing the pope in the face." I just couldn't stop laughing !

aww CUTE!!! I should really stop reading warm fuzzy stories when I have a big project due...*sigh*

Just read it.
Loved it. :)
There seriously should be more Seth love going around, because he's amazing. :)
~Chelsea~

hey girl are you going to do another?

it was really good. =)

O_O
omg, that was friggin amazahzing...im probbably late as i dont know what but it's supah kickass!
XD

OMG!!! UPDATE! I LOVE your story and I feel so sad for them all. Waaa!!!! T_T Please update? I'm dieing more every minute..... I need to know that everything will be okay.... T_T

~nyaa....

O_O
Oh mah gawd.
I love your story! Its absolutely friggin ama-zah-zing!
SUBSCIRBE.
woot woot.

*Mushii

Good thing Edward has a plan... if they actually did anything it would sicken me. lol. Bella and Edward for ever! lol
OMG! Bella's initials are B.S, that would suck.

Omigosh. That was really good! Only, did you know that you posted the last chapter twice?

Well, I just finished reading the "My Dear Juliet" chapter. I really like the Carlisle and the Pope comment. My firends would just roll their eyes at that. They seem to have this strange idea that I make biblical references everyday...

Wow, this is a good story! I'm liking it! =) I subscribed =) Poor Seth, he's such a grouch now. But I like it in a story it makes sense. He can't always be so cheerful and happy. It's nice to see he has feelings too and he's not just a fake. =)

OMG! I love this story. Funny, sarcastic, yet dramatic at the same time.

That sucks when stories vanish like that. My Flashdrive caught a virus once, so I pulled all my story stuff--about 113 MB of it--on the C:Drive of my computer. And then the computer crashed. 10 stories gone. So I know how you feel. It's frustrating, and you feel like you want to throw your computer through the window.

Persevere, that's all I can say.

It sucks when technology fails.
It happens to us all.
I'll wait for you to sort it out :;) cause I love this story.

(Don't tell anyone, but I've been really really REALLY bad with my stories recently, have not updated in a long while... :shifty)

That shit happened to me once.
It sucks, I sympathize with you.
Comment me when you get it up and running again.

I don't have a preference in pov as of yet, but it is maybe leaning in Ally's direction. She's pretty awesome.

The new banner is gorgeous :mrgreen:
Keep it up hun!

Seth's POV is soooo much better.
He's awesome.
And Sam better watch out because Emily might just take off with Mindy, lol.
Awe.

WHOA.

i can not tell you how many people have tried to create a story off of the series.....but yours is amazing.

Fantastic update.
This story is awesomely not-shallow in plot. There always seems to be something else popping up. :mrgreen:
Ally is the greatest. Her power is awesome