January 7th, 2009 at 03:20pm
Kay.
First reading.
Goddamn, good story.
Seth is a sarcastic ass and I love him.
Update soon :)
Forbidden Temptation - Comments
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January 2nd, 2009 at 08:39am
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I love Seth. He's a werewolf cutie.
And the way Ally can use power, really well described.
I want to repeat what Evie has said up there ^^December 31st, 2008 at 09:22pm -
Very good job with this update.
Ally's an amazing character - I love her talent, and the way you described it was lovely.
I can't wait for more.December 31st, 2008 at 06:55am -
I love this story.
Fantastic update.
The imprinting was wonderfully not cheesy like Stephenie Meyer's was.
Wonderful.December 30th, 2008 at 02:08am -
Oh! Great update.
I swear, Ally gets more interesting every chapter!December 29th, 2008 at 09:52pm -
Very good update.
Aro in a Hugh Heffner robe makes me laugh.
:tehe:December 25th, 2008 at 04:06am -
This is a great start to what looks like a great story. I'm subscribing and waiting eagerly for an update :mrgreen:
It's nice to have a non-cliched twilight flick :cute:December 25th, 2008 at 12:45am -
I love this so far.
The shift in POV's isn't something I usually like but you pull it off very well and I'm a sucker for Seth.
He is my favourite in the pack, after all.
I'm definitely subscribing.
But I have a question...
Is Ally a human or a vampire?
:)December 24th, 2008 at 02:19am
I gotta say, I'm loving the whole Jacob being Jacob thing, lol.
More please!