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  • plug-in-baby

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    damm. im glad that they 'talked' but i sure do hope they make up soon. im starting not to like paul as much, i want alex!
    August 7th, 2009 at 05:58am
  • starkidheather

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    FUCKING AMAZING!
    holy shit! i've never really been into fanfics, but this has totally changed that.
    god, i love this story.
    update soon?




    --hEAthER--
    August 7th, 2009 at 03:44am
  • gardetoncoeur

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    This chapter was really good!
    From the party to winning the game
    && the underwear thing to the brother getting wasted
    && the confertation with Alex to going to the room
    && everything else!
    I would make this longer, but I'm tired and I dont' feel good,
    so I'm sorry D:
    Probably wil be the same for the next story comment
    Sorry to say :|

    But update soon :D
    August 7th, 2009 at 02:51am
  • kaitlinnelaine

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    Gahh, I cried reading it :(
    Poor Awrex and Chlowe.
    && Poor Pwaul for being stuck in the middle of it.
    August 7th, 2009 at 02:18am
  • jfk

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    seriously got teary-eyed during the fight scene, hahaha
    good writing :)
    August 7th, 2009 at 01:58am
  • catastrophe.

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    I can like, feel both their hearts breaking. :(
    August 7th, 2009 at 01:24am
  • Josh Montgomery

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    *tear*
    Love the drama.
    Teared up during the fight.

    Loved the part with Jack puking. And Danny.
    August 7th, 2009 at 01:23am
  • ForeverTheSickestMe!

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    love the new update.
    update soon
    August 7th, 2009 at 01:22am
  • Aliyah-loves-A7x

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    this chapter made me want to cry
    August 7th, 2009 at 01:04am
  • wafflesattack

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    ahh
    I kinda want to junk punch both of them.
    XP
    August 6th, 2009 at 10:40pm
  • Back Jarakat

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    I laughed, and cried, and wanted to beat Alex up, as much as I love him still, too. So all in all, great chapter!

    OH! And A Price For My Soul is an amazing story, along with two amazing writers, because one of them wrote this story, and the other is my best friend, heheh, so yeah, I reccomend you check it out!
    August 6th, 2009 at 10:36pm
  • mmmxkkxthanks

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    Oh man.
    Alex should have gone after him.
    He's an idiot.
    August 6th, 2009 at 09:59pm
  • Divide the Joy

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    You know how long i've been waiting for this. It was the first thing I went to when I got on the internet.

    Now I feel depressed

    But I still love it.
    August 6th, 2009 at 09:26pm
  • hannerbananer

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    well i won't deny it, i cried a little bit.
    poor chole.
    August 6th, 2009 at 09:13pm
  • pansypants

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    omg ! LOVED IT <3
    alex broke my heart too. lol
    August 6th, 2009 at 08:43pm
  • punkrockromance

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    OH GOD!!! I should have read this before Jamais Vu.

    I definitely welled up during the fight scene. You are really good at ripping out the heart and stomping on it girl, haha. I can only imagine how hard it was to write it.

    I'm still team Alex in case you were wondering :D
    August 6th, 2009 at 08:22pm
  • dree.

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    aww.
    this is no bueno.
    i want to slap both of them.
    but eh.
    they need to have angry sex or something. you know you wanna write itt ;P
    August 6th, 2009 at 08:06pm
  • JunkFoodJunkie

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    Oh shnap.
    Alex boyo think on your feet and go after her.
    I don't think I like Paul and Chloe being together anymore.
    I want it to end. Like asap. Lol.
    I've been reading that collab one. I love it! Its so new and different.

    More pleeeeeease :D x
    August 6th, 2009 at 07:50pm
  • Apple.

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    Okay I have made it to chapter 53! I am almost there!
    August 5th, 2009 at 09:37pm
  • ashlynlol

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    u better have a good explanation, girl... loving two men is just.... selfish and greedy... only one! not more; that's the unwritten rule...
    August 4th, 2009 at 01:29pm