This chapter was really good! From the party to winning the game && the underwear thing to the brother getting wasted && the confertation with Alex to going to the room && everything else! I would make this longer, but I'm tired and I dont' feel good, so I'm sorry D: Probably wil be the same for the next story comment Sorry to say :|
I laughed, and cried, and wanted to beat Alex up, as much as I love him still, too. So all in all, great chapter!
OH! And A Price For My Soul is an amazing story, along with two amazing writers, because one of them wrote this story, and the other is my best friend, heheh, so yeah, I reccomend you check it out!
OH GOD!!! I should have read this before Jamais Vu.
I definitely welled up during the fight scene. You are really good at ripping out the heart and stomping on it girl, haha. I can only imagine how hard it was to write it.
Oh shnap. Alex boyo think on your feet and go after her. I don't think I like Paul and Chloe being together anymore. I want it to end. Like asap. Lol. I've been reading that collab one. I love it! Its so new and different.