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  • Loveless1

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    i cant beleave theres only two more chapter left i gonna miss this story

    hope you update soon. ;p
    June 14th, 2009 at 01:31am
  • LifeLovesMusic

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    I don't know if you realized but both chapter started with basically the same line...hahaha sorry I find that amusing...

    I'm glad Hayley apologized and everything is good between them again...
    and I'm glad Rosie is realizing that she loves Ben...sheesh, took her long enough! lol

    and Zacky. well he messed up big time. really really did. but still...I just...ya know? I don't want him to be all lonely for the rest of his life. as big of a douche move he made, he was working from his heart. He was like one of those confused little puppies who doesn't know whether to chase after the ball or the stick that two people have thrown....that analogy was long and weird. I admit it. but still. there is a point. I just don't think he should be completely screwed because I really don't think he had any bad intentions.

    loved the update hun!
    can't wait for more!!!!

    ♫Peace Out♫
    June 13th, 2009 at 09:59pm
  • Freak Out

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    Doesn't matter that rosie lied to her, Haley still "knew." she had sneaking suspicions but I'm kinda happy that Zacky is getting screwed over.
    June 13th, 2009 at 09:06pm
  • Hoodie.V

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    aw, how sweet =]
    so now I don't know who she should belong with; Zacky or Ben
    June 13th, 2009 at 07:33pm
  • Killer_vamp

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    if you don't bring Zacky back in the story, i'm going to hunt you down!

    also this is THE greatest story i've ever read, i cried so much... it's really emotional

    update
    June 13th, 2009 at 04:06pm
  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    look i love this, but its a bit of a train wreck isn't it!?
    how the hell is everyone gonna end up happy?
    June 13th, 2009 at 03:45pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    omg, sweets! i loved it so much! i can't wait for more! tehehe
    June 13th, 2009 at 02:46pm
  • FallBackDown

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    They made up!!!!! aww happy times!!! and yay for ben, he seems pretty awesome!!!!!
    x
    June 13th, 2009 at 01:55pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    HAH! she didn't swear Brian to secrecy so...whilst the way is slightly fucked for her and Zacky to be in love once more as they should have been forever ago... it is possible. OH YEAH!!
    I can't believe it's happening like this though...oh shit it's gonna get worse before it gets better, yes?
    More soon??
    June 5th, 2009 at 04:44pm
  • FallBackDown

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    Aww awesomeness they're okay =D
    I love Lyndsey and Brian in this story they are amazing!!!!!
    I just love the story!!!!
    xx
    June 4th, 2009 at 09:47pm
  • Loveless1

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    There back at good terms again thats great! ;p lol

    Can't wait for the next chapter ;p
    June 4th, 2009 at 05:14am
  • Call The Angels

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    Oh good! They aren't upset with each other anymore.
    Goodness knows this story isn't in desperate need of anymore people at odds with each other. lol!
    Loved it Sarah!
    June 4th, 2009 at 01:08am
  • ButterflyWarmth

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    I can kind of understand her sister a bit, but I would only be able to take her side if they weren't sisters. I wish she would believe her own sister! I'm hoping she gathers up the courage to go back to Huntington Beach (even though England is the best place ever) but I doubt she will. I'm thinking that Zacky might go and look for her or something. He's probably going to ruin her life just as she had started to heal.

    I love Brian! He's such an amazing friend and boyfriend! Lyndsey too! She is awesome! I'm glad they're back on good terms and she can leave knowing that she still had someone there who deeply cared for her. Other than that I an't wait to find out what happens next! XD
    June 4th, 2009 at 12:43am
  • LifeLovesMusic

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    oh. my. johnny. I'm pretty sure that was the happiest chapter you've ever written! hahaha

    I loved it....as usual. and the funny comment about Jimmy. great. lol
    I can't wait for her to get better so she can come back and hang with the guys. or she might stay in England...with Ben. yeah that might happen. I guess she has to go stay with Ben so the two of them can develope their relationship more fully.

    until next time.
    can't wait for more

    ♫Peace Out♫
    June 4th, 2009 at 12:24am
  • Hoodie.V

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    Aw, so she is leaving. I had a small glimmer of hope that she'd change her mind. =[
    I still loved it though. =]
    June 3rd, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • ForeverPlagued

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    yay for repaired friendships! lol loved it, sweets!
    June 3rd, 2009 at 11:43pm
  • IdiotDorkGeek

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    brilliant.
    June 3rd, 2009 at 10:47pm
  • BabyDollBlue

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    Aw heartfelt letters are nice
    LOVED the update hunny
    June 3rd, 2009 at 09:53pm
  • Freak Out

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    aw, thats so sad, zaclys a douche and her sister is a bitch.
    June 3rd, 2009 at 08:14pm
  • gipsy danger.

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    AHHH WOO
    I loved ittt!! yes I did!
    Rosie should not be allowed to go! I forbid it!
    hahaha though she does need to get her head straight
    but cant she go to the beach or something? lmaooo
    mann I love this story!
    June 3rd, 2009 at 07:31pm