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  • cirquedushadows

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    NNOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was a good story, i felt emotion from it i wanted to laugh, cry and every motion inbetween!
    May 11th, 2011 at 05:13am
  • nikkirad

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    sniff sniff i just finished this story and i cried at the end, this is a really good story so thank you for writing ^_^
    October 25th, 2010 at 12:34am
  • Ziannaline

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    awwww... its soo sad.. but soo good T.T
    October 13th, 2010 at 01:33am
  • i ate the devil

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    Chapter 14 and 15 seriously remind me of a movie I saw, like the EXACT words of that movie... o.O
    August 22nd, 2010 at 07:11am
  • xJeNnAxXxMaRiEx

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    im not going to lie one bit, ive read so many stories on here, but this has got to be the best one by far. not every story gets to have a happy ending, but you ended your amazingly.! i believe this truly is a perfect story & i really think you wrote it flawlessly. your an excellent writer and i hope you really can go far with it :D
    August 11th, 2010 at 11:05am
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    February 10th, 2010 at 04:17am
  • Jody!

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    I loved it very good job and story it almost had me in tears towards the end!! =)
    January 23rd, 2010 at 07:51am
  • J I N X

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    WAAAAAAAAAAAAAH TT.TT that's was effin the best and so sad T.T her dad can go die; fahk!
    i loved this story so good job finishing it ^^
    October 31st, 2009 at 12:13am
  • Snuggle_Bottoms

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    I luv the story sooo much its sooooo sad though she died but she died in the arms of the person she was in love with it was really good bur sad at the same time I cried.
    October 17th, 2009 at 06:47am
  • Snuggle_Bottoms

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    You should make an alternative ending to this story. I cried at the end.
    October 17th, 2009 at 06:44am
  • Saying-I'm-So-Sorry

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    It was sooo good
    I cried
    I LOVED the story
    The ending was sad but beautiful
    October 15th, 2009 at 10:47pm
  • love me or leave me

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    am i the only one who balled at the last chapter that was so sad great story!
    October 15th, 2009 at 04:34am
  • maryhadalittlelamb

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    ... Have you thought about making a sequel...like, from chance's pov or somthing:p. ?? :)
    October 14th, 2009 at 08:38am
  • maryhadalittlelamb

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    P.S. You did a great job with the story :'). Your an awrsome writer. And cant' wait for the next story :)
    October 14th, 2009 at 08:34am
  • maryhadalittlelamb

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    Ahhhhhhh!!! Noooo. How saaaad D: - i'm crying right now. :'(. The ending was soooo sad-sorta- especially the last line. :'(. Still crying.......

    --i'll be-sob- on the-sob- look out-sob- for the-sob-all time low story.... :/
    October 14th, 2009 at 08:32am
  • angie.love

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    crying right now ! So sad.. Really great story.
    October 14th, 2009 at 03:31am
  • faithleilani

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    This is by far one of the best stories i have ever read
    this shit needs to be published
    i was on the verge of crying. . . which is a lot to say cuz i never cry while reading
    amazing
    wish there was so much more
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    faith
    October 14th, 2009 at 03:29am
  • Ri0t

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    im crying also
    thankz for mentioning me
    nos, maybe sequeal bout chance? ehe
    still sad, poor jasmine.
    poor everyone.
    October 14th, 2009 at 01:50am
  • samiiRAWR

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    I luvved this story!
    The ending was soo sad though :*(
    Amazing job =]
    October 14th, 2009 at 01:40am
  • lizzygill24

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    I have a fetish with happy endings and usually hate things that end sadly...but I loved this story every step of the way. Reminds me of part of the ending of The Lords Of Discipline by Pat Conroy. WHY DID IT HAVE TO BE PIG?!?!?!?! TOT
    October 14th, 2009 at 01:39am
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