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  • Sydz Snickers

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    I want to cry so bad right now!
    Shes dead I cant believe it!
    I mean he is kist there and she is dead and and and I wana cryyyyyy!!
    It was a great story and I loved every minute of it.
    The plot was awesome and the characters were original and I loved it!
    But I am sooooo saaaaadddd
    October 14th, 2009 at 12:12am
  • j'adore.

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    oh my god.
    I wasn't expecting the ending! That was so sad, it almost brought me to tears.
    D8
    October 13th, 2009 at 10:46pm
  • WhoStoleMyCookies

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    i cried........ thts how gud it was u wrote the sad part so well i cried.
    October 13th, 2009 at 08:45pm
  • The8thDeadlySin

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    that was an awsome story. i cried when when she died. good story cuz not many make me cry.lol.
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:40pm
  • darkeyes14226

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    Ok now I want to cry...
    October 13th, 2009 at 04:48pm
  • XdieXanotherXdayX

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    *tears trying to fall down face* that was so.........i dont even the word for it *a light giggle escapes my lips* well great story
    October 13th, 2009 at 04:06pm
  • TinklingOfThePiano

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    No no no no no no... It's not fair for Jas!!! Why din u let her lived???!!!! She was suppose to have a good life after what she had gone through!!!
    October 13th, 2009 at 01:32pm
  • A.U.T.O.M.A.T.I.C

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    damn you for making me cry this early in the morning! and now i have to re-do my makeup. *curses you for writing such great storys*
    October 13th, 2009 at 01:13pm
  • celestial_royalty

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    I don't get a special label? I'm so hurt *sobs* message me
    October 13th, 2009 at 07:38am
  • debzxxx

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    great epilogue :)
    i agree with marachristine, you should definitely write a sequel
    October 13th, 2009 at 07:34am
  • xoNatasha5xo

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    I love this story so much, it was so good. I actually cried, and I'm not lying.

    Keep on writing your really good.
    October 13th, 2009 at 07:33am
  • Mrs.Captian Morgan

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    I loved your story sooo much it ended very well.
    My only wish for u is to make a squeal were he has to move on and he falls in love again, please don't make him die.
    Good luck,
    mara
    October 13th, 2009 at 07:28am
  • K_atie.

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    omg! I am trying like my hardest not to burst into tears right now. This is such an intensly good story. =' )
    October 13th, 2009 at 07:28am
  • debzxxx

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    WHY DID SHE DIEEEE? :'( :' ( :'(
    omgg thats so sad! :( :( :( :(:( *snarf snarf*
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:52am
  • darkeyes14226

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    *sniffle sniffle tear* Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Why? *cries* Say it isn't so! She can't be dead!
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:50am
  • Dezi Demize

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    WHY DID YOU HAVE TO KILL HER????
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:39am
  • Hate?Love!

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    I Almost Cried During This Chapter The First Story Ever!
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:30am
  • celestial_royalty

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    *cringe* her dad is a fucking creepyass bastard that needs to suck it and go to hell. and aww I LOVE IAN AND CHANCE!! <3 <3 <3 haha let me get with Ian. Let me at him!!!
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:20am
  • Favole

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    i cant believe shes dying :'(
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:19am
  • XdieXanotherXdayX

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    nooooooooooooo! she cant die! T^T
    October 13th, 2009 at 06:18am