Scars - Comments

Holy helllllll.
This story is awesome. I can't wait for more!! (:

Love it! :)

Sweet update! :) It's getting more and more complicated as time goes... what with Chad finding out about them..

I absoutly Love this story :D!
Can't wait for the new update :D!

Sweet update! :) With Chad in the group and everything... I'm sensing more trouble ahead...

More updates yeah! Love the chapter where Scarlett and the Joker had their first kiss. A very interesting chapter indeed. Both of them are starting to discover who they are, etc. Can't wait for more. :) Well done!

Loving the story more and more each day! :) It seems to be heading in a great direction filled with complications and somewhat sweet memories (hopefully). The character of Scarlett is developing chapter by chapter which is a great surprise every time I read it. :) Keep it up!

jetblackhotelmirror:

I have to say that I really am loving the flow with this story. It's so simple but yet so complicated...that it's simply complicated? A true sign of a great story is the ability to be paradoxical. Keeps the reader intrigued.
'I lIke that.' (joker voice :P)

Till next time...
--+--jae--+--

Thank you so much! :D

You hit it on the nail! I wanted to make it "simple" and "complex" at the same time, I'm glad someone said that! You truly made my day and inspired me to get on a new chapter right now :D

I have to say that I really am loving the flow with this story. It's so simple but yet so complicated...that it's simply complicated? A true sign of a great story is the ability to be paradoxical. Keeps the reader intrigued.
'I lIke that.' (joker voice :P)

Till next time...
--+--jae--+--

Thanks for the comments again, really appreciated them.

Tis okay. Take your time. I'm actually surprised at how fast your updates are. :) And I also know writers need their time. So, no rush. :)

Again, really good chapters. :) I loved the way she reacted and figured out the fact that the Joker is Jack unlike some stories where it's so obvious and the characters just can't figure it out. I also like how strong the visual is in both chapters, the way the characters feel, their actions, etc. Good one! :) Keep it up!

P.S: There's a few grammar mistakes and spelling errors. Just throught you might like to know. :)

this story is reall good i can't wait for the next chapter

platypusgdfan:

Dum dum dum...

A lot of action in this one... I love it!

"Women!"

XD. I literally laughed out loud whilst reading it.

I wonder what's he gonna do.. and how she's going to react... this is getting interesting.

And you're welcome.

P.S: There are some minor spelling and grammatical errors in the latest update. Just thought you would like to know. :)

Thanks for your comments again, glad to make you laugh!

Sheww, I figured they would be. I have a lot going on today and I didn't go back and read over it like I should have. I'll get around to editing it soon, I'm trying to get another chapter out right now since I won't be around for a few days. But thank you so much for pointing it out to me :)

Dum dum dum...

A lot of action in this one... I love it!

"Women!"

XD. I literally laughed out loud whilst reading it.

I wonder what's he gonna do.. and how she's going to react... this is getting interesting.

And you're welcome.

P.S: There are some minor spelling and grammatical errors in the latest update. Just thought you would like to know. :)

platypusgdfan:

Digging the latest update. I like the fact that you wrote some girl bonding time, then her relationship with the Joker is growing by the minute which is sorta sweet. :)

Thanks, so much for commenting and giving your opinion on the story. Means a lot ;D

Digging the latest update. I like the fact that you wrote some girl bonding time, then her relationship with the Joker is growing by the minute which is sorta sweet. :)

Amazing update! :) Communicating through internet, forced to go out with a corrupt officer, almost getting kidnapped... nice! :)

Love what you did with the story so far. :) Keep it up!

I love this story dollface! Amazing! I can't wait for more! AMAZINGGGG!

:D :D!!!

Eternal Rest:

Brilliant first three chapters. Love the characters, but yet i already hate Zeke with a passion. NEVER say yes to men like that. I like the way you have Joke going after her instead of the usual see and kidnap. Definently different, in a good way.

Thank goodness that someone likes the idea. I really didn't want to make another whole 'see, kidnap, beat, love, repeat' Joker story. I wanted to make something I hadn't read before.

I hate Zeke too, but he just fits into the story so perfectly. Anyways, thanks for commenting and reading the story :)

Brilliant first three chapters. Love the characters, but yet i already hate Zeke with a passion. NEVER say yes to men like that. I like the way you have Joke going after her instead of the usual see and kidnap. Definently different, in a good way.