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  • atrocious

    atrocious (100)

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    platypusgdfan:
    Hi! Just want to say I like the first chapter! I think it's a good intro for the story. Can't wait for more updates. :)

    P.S.: Just a little suggestion, maybe the part where you interconnect the girls with the scene of the Joker, you could put stars or a dash or something to let the readers know that meanwhile, somewhere else so and so is happening. It'll be easier.
    Thanks for the comment.

    and thanks for the suggestion. I may take that into consideration in my up & coming chapters.
    January 20th, 2009 at 08:36pm
  • platypusgdfan

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    Hi! Just want to say I like the first chapter! I think it's a good intro for the story. Can't wait for more updates. :)

    P.S.: Just a little suggestion, maybe the part where you interconnect the girls with the scene of the Joker, you could put stars or a dash or something to let the readers know that meanwhile, somewhere else so and so is happening. It'll be easier.
    January 20th, 2009 at 07:52pm