I'd Kiss You Goodbye If I Thought It Would Make You Stay - Comments

  • candycanepirate

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    YAYYYYYY!!!! :D
    yayayayay!
    ahhh, that was great<3
    April 14th, 2009 at 11:55pm
  • fatehathnomercy

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    *smiles* this one was epic .. and to top that you're going to have to do more ... seriously ... *laughs* though Epic comes in many ways!
    April 14th, 2009 at 11:45pm
  • daydreamer2006

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    Yayy!!!!!

    As sad as I am that Michael's hurt.... they're together.
    So I'm really not sad (:
    April 14th, 2009 at 09:44pm
  • randy orton.

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    YAAAAAY!!!!
    they got together :DDDD
    glad michael is okay
    April 14th, 2009 at 09:12pm
  • See.

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    Brilliant, darling.
    I'm so glad they're back together! <33
    Can't wait for more.
    April 14th, 2009 at 08:41pm
  • RainCheck

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    So freaking good, best chapter yet! Update soon! <3
    I MEAN THAT :P
    April 14th, 2009 at 06:07pm
  • randy orton.

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    OMG!
    AHHHH, why!?!?!

    :[ sad its a cliffy
    April 13th, 2009 at 09:20pm
  • See.

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    This might sound kind of mean, but I love it when this type of thing happens in stories... as long as he doesn't die.
    'Cause that would be mean.
    But, even though she already realised what was going on, this'll probably knock some sense into her, and make her realise how much she needs him etc.
    I adored the chapter.
    And, don't worry, I won't kill you. =) Scout's honour.
    April 13th, 2009 at 12:47pm
  • fatehathnomercy

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    *laughs* I told you Evan was funny ... he's an awesome guy .. I love-ed him uber much I swear ... Already planning to buy his CD ...

    Chapter was love and made me want to jump in and rush her to hospital ... Hum ... and on that note .. I am leaving you ...
    April 13th, 2009 at 10:32am
  • InYourEyes2410

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    WHAT ACCIDENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please no suicide attemps!
    =S
    well i liked how you did the whole comparrison to sodoku =p
    and you have a way with words that makes me just want MORE

    love it!

    xx
    April 13th, 2009 at 07:24am
  • do.the helenkelerr.

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    oh. my.god. dra.mat.ic.
    19x more dra.mat.ic. screw 10.
    i really was thinking about killing you for a second.... justkiddingthatwouldn'tbenice.
    soon, please? :)
    April 13th, 2009 at 07:13am
  • Shenanigans0803

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    FINALLY!! -sighs in relief-
    i got all excited for a moment cause I thougth they were going to make up right then and there but I WaS WRONG! I wonder what happened to Chizzy!! I think that he 1) got into a car accident or 2) this is some prank that Chizzy is pulling...but I think its nĂºmero one :(
    April 13th, 2009 at 07:03am
  • To_Settle_The_Score

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    Aw I'm catching up! He came to her and she screwed it all up and then right when she was about to fix it he was in an accident!!! =( That is rather depressing but I know whatever you will write next will only make this story better! I can't wait to see what's going to come next!!!
    April 13th, 2009 at 06:47am
  • HarperB82

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    Maybe I'm weird, but I loved this chapter. I'm glad Michael stepped up, but I totally understood all of Rae's fears. I think Michael got it too, even if it was hard for him to hear. It looks like he knows it'll take some time. I'm glad that Rae realized the gesture Michael had made when he broke up with her. He knew that the relationship may hold her back from getting to where she is now. I'm really glad that she realized that. It'll obviously take some work to be in a relationship because they are both in successful bands that are touring. I hope that Michael is okay. I know Rae will be there for him - or I hope, and maybe this can be the start of something good. I really liked the way we got to see into Rae's head and I felt like I got it when she did, haha Can't wait for more! :)
    April 13th, 2009 at 04:59am
  • bassrulestheworld

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    It's nice to know that he's not gonna die
    but I still wanna know what happened to him

    it was a very nice update, even though Michael is in the hospital for an unknown reason
    it was still good
    so I can't wait to read more
    April 13th, 2009 at 04:29am
  • Shenanigans0803

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    YES MICHAEL, WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU WAITING FOR?
    Image
    April 13th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • HarperB82

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    I like to see that Michael is still in Chicago and he's so nervous. I really hope that he can admit how he feels. I don't know if I'm ready for surprises that make me not like you haha I'm sure it'll still be good! Can't wait for more! :)
    April 11th, 2009 at 10:19pm
  • hockeyXgirlsXrock

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    wait, wait, wait, kill you ahead of time,OMG, whats gonna happen?!!! holyy, now i want it to come soo much faster!! ugh...not cool...but if its really twice as long and 10x more exciting, then i guess its worth the wait ;P (just like every other chapter is =P) but ya, i loved the chapter, and o-my-god, michael is sooo adorable, i love him soo much XD (although admittedly probably not as much as Rae =P) but ya, i love it, keep it up =D
    April 11th, 2009 at 06:28pm
  • InYourEyes2410

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    cant wait for more =P
    and again with the sneeking to the computer. cause is damn holy week my parents have decided no electronics. :P
    so glad my phone has internet! (probs costing me a fortune tho. lol)
    (so sitting in room reading =p)
    April 11th, 2009 at 12:40am
  • See.

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    Yeah, Michael;
    What are you waiting for?????
    Can't wait for more!! =)
    April 10th, 2009 at 11:23pm