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  • A7XBABY

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    Wooooooowwwww I love this story soo much
    December 29th, 2009 at 02:43am
  • lizicea7x

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    hey this story is interesting y like this triangle
    matt is a great man in every way
    September 12th, 2009 at 04:42am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    too be honest i am uberhappy that they aren't 'together' anymore
    i can't wait for more updates
    this chapter was amazing and i hope you computer stops having problems =D
    <3 Michele
    September 3rd, 2009 at 12:45am
  • DaniVendetta

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    Wow, Brian is a sleeze! I'm glad Matt is there for her though. And Danni falling down the stairs was freaking funny! Poor Danni!

    Can't wait for more! :)
    September 2nd, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Aww... Why did Brian have to be such an ass? Stupid Haner... I knew I had a bad feeling about him... But I didn't wanna be right about it. Poor Haylee. At least Matt was there for her.

    Loved the update! Lookin' forward to more!
    September 2nd, 2009 at 09:32pm
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    I can't beleive he did that to her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    What an ass!!!
    but at least Matty was there for her!!!!
    September 2nd, 2009 at 07:39pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    "Listen... I don't know how to say this but..." He started.

    He stepped closer to me and grabbed my hip with his left hand, pulling me close to him. He brought his right hand up and cupped my chin, making me look up into his eyes. He leaned down and kissed my lips passionately, taking me by surprise.


    Seems he knew exactly how to say it... = p Not that she or any other girl would complain if he "said" something like that to her. hahaha.

    "Yeah, you were touching yourself and all." He stated, smiling widely.

    God, that would be humiliating... coz not only is he a guy she isn't at the point of being that comfortable around.. but he's Synyster Fucking Gates! I'm surprised she didn't just roll off the bed and try and hide under it... I would've. hahaha.

    "Let's have sex on the couch." He proposed...

    Ahahahaha! God, who wouldn't want a proposal like that from him? Though maybe not on Brian's couch... coz, well, awkward.. hahaha.

    "You seem a little horny; maybe I can help you with that." He said, with an amused smile.

    LMAO! Now if only she was a lil more confident... she could've said "Hell yeah you can!" hahaha

    The date is very sweet. Perfect first date... he outdid himself with that one! hahaha.

    Is it weird you made me really want to move in with Zacky? Cause you did. Especially if I get to share his bed... *smiles like a goof* :D

    Awww! Well, I'm pretty sure I know who put her to bed... it was Jimmy, wasn't it? = p He's gonna come in now and try and take her out from under both Brian and Matt's noses... hahahaha.

    Great chapter and I look forward to more!
    August 9th, 2009 at 07:55am
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    dirty matty dreams!! lol
    I loved it!
    August 9th, 2009 at 12:23am
  • synfulpixie

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    Matt! Give me a sex! ROTFL

    This update was great. It made me laugh so hard. The awkward Matt moments were hilarious! The date was so perfect, and Brian was so sweet....too bad she wants Matt!!

    *sits patiently awaiting more* :file:
    August 8th, 2009 at 09:19pm
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Man, that would have been embarrassing. Don't blame her for acting all weird around Matt. And that was a cute date with Brian. He's such a sweetie. haha.

    Loved the update and I'm lookin' forward to more!
    August 8th, 2009 at 09:05pm
  • Natta

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    I'm really liking this story so far! I can't wait to read more. :)
    July 13th, 2009 at 11:21pm
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Awww, he fell asleep! Hahaha.
    July 11th, 2009 at 08:17pm
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    ahahaah he fell asleep!!
    July 11th, 2009 at 08:08pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    I still think that's so cute how Haylee got all embarassed when Matt was sitting on the couch with her! Though I can't blame her... I'd feel completely awkward sitting next to a man that sexy... I mean, come on! The man just oozes sex appeal... hahaha.

    "Dude, get a room." Matt said jokingly, looking at his friend.

    "Geez, can't a man give his woman some lovin'?" Zacky replied, winking back at him and chuckling.


    Yes, yes he can! Matt's just jealous coz he wants to do that to Haylee but can't, hahaha = p

    It was almost as if she could read your mind.

    I wish I really could read peoples minds... that would be so awesome.. hahaha

    Haha, so funny how Zacky walks in and thought Haylee was changing.. poor boy nearly had a heart attack from embarrassment. hahaha. He's such a cutie! :D

    I still say we're taking a limo like that when I'm a millonaire.. but we wont bother going to any clubs, we'll just drive around and party in the hummer! :D

    I absolutely love the exchange between Jimmy and Johnny about the girl! And I'm glad Johnny won... he needed a win. haha. But poor Jimmy! He'll get the next one, though = p

    Still love the dancing mix up! Matt got her all hot and bothered... hahaha. Funny that she got even more into it once she realised it was Matt and not Brian... bet she overlooked that, though. Huh? = p

    Ahahaha! And I still love my stupid dance with Matt... that would be so much fun. hahaha.

    So, i'm gonna post the second part of my comment when you add the second half of the chapter :)
    July 9th, 2009 at 07:37pm
  • Fictional.Reality

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    i loved this update
    it was amazing
    update soon please
    <3 Michele
    July 3rd, 2009 at 03:25pm
  • CharmedAngel88

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    Loved the update!
    And is it a bad thing that I want her to be with Matt? I mean, I love Bri and all, but there's something about Matt in this one. I want her with him. Haha.
    I'm looking forward to more!
    July 3rd, 2009 at 02:35am
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    I loved it!!!!!!!!
    I so want her to be with Matty!!!!
    July 3rd, 2009 at 01:05am
  • evencrayonslaughatme

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    I love this story!!!!!!1
    June 24th, 2009 at 12:07am
  • Fictional.Reality

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    i just caught up on all of the chapters
    and i love it so much
    i can't wait for the next chapter
    <3 Michele
    June 14th, 2009 at 06:18am
  • Midnight. Shadows.

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    LOVE IT! Continue! Love triangles are my favorite. :)
    June 14th, 2009 at 04:45am