Hostage - Comments

I absolutely love this story! I think it's my third time re-reading it, I was so upset when it ended.

well, I just read this entire story in one sitting. oh my goodness. I loved it. I cried like a baby whenever Brian "died." god, I seriously felt my heart breaking. haha. loved it so much.

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Theres not a lot I can say...apart from Holy Shit.

This story brought out so many emotions...I cried so hard at so many different points...damn...you really hit me deep with this one.
Definitley one of my favourites :')

OH my fuck. It is damn 3:25 in the morning. I have been reading this story on and off all fucking day. I cant even move my fingers to type this or see the keyvs myy eyesa are so damn blurry. The only words that are coming to minsd right now are HOLY FUCK. in the fucking best way poissible. Sorry for the spelling errors. I cant think and beacskspacing is too much work. I will say more specidic stuff when I can think. LOVE.

One word for this story. Wow.

I was going to hunt you down and kill you when I thought Bri had been killed of, but the fact he was alive made me smile so damn much :)
EPIC!

Hey! I know you finished this story a while back but I just read it and wanted to let you know I think this story was epically brilliant! Kudos to you!!

i didn't like that they had to be criminals again >:(! if that wasnt a part of the ending it would have been a perfect ending

Well, there are only two words for this story: Bloody Amazing.
It was awesome! I actually cried at the bit where Brian 'died' *sniffle*
Then it took me completely by surprise when he came back!
I really liked the fact that the kidnapped and kidnapper didn't start making out within the first two chapter. That was awesome =P
It was just...amazing, and the ending was great! Very, very cute ending!
Well done!!
xx =D

First off...this is my first time reading this story AND I FUCKIN LOVEEEE IT!!! SOOO MUCH!! xD

Second...i could have KILLED YOU for the part about Brian dying!! >.< i yelled so loud my bf looked at me from the TV and said "what's wrong with you, something in the story ur reading?" LMAO

This is the BEST, i mean BEST, hostage story i have ever read!! Dude, you are AMAZING!! xDDD

I loveeee you xD haha totally kidding :) but it was AWESOME! : D

I stumbled across this story about a year ago (it was already finished, of course) and since then I've read it countless times and I know, I should've left a comment a long time ago. I blame it on my laziness.

I've read many kidnap/Stockholm syndrome* themed stories, but most of them sucked ass.
BUT THIS IS THE BEST ONE! Unlike those other stories, this one has a logical and carefully thought out plot. Tess is a smart, strong heroine but most importantly she is realistic; not another 'Mary Sue'. Also, she's not a complete wimp if you get my drift. And thank God, you didn't use 'tiny frame' when describing a girl! Because in almost every story I came across, the main female character has a 'tiny frame' (this expression is overused by fat writers, especially)! What is she an anorexic midget or something?!

To sum up: entertaining, adrenaline fueled, well thought both plot and characters, holds the reader's interest.

My favourite moment was when Tess thought there were burglars downstairs, but to her surprise (and mine's) it was the one and only Brian. I just fuckin' love how he was convincing her it was really him. I'm sure I stopped breathing while I was reading that part. Very well written, Katelyn.

One of my favourite stories on Mibba, and it gets better every time I read it!
What can I add more? Oh yeah, I can totally imagine Brian wearing that suit *drools*.

*Stockholm Syndrome is actually a song by Muse, go listen to it if you haven't already! (Lol I know that's totally random, I don't know if you like them, but *serious face* I highly recommend that song).

JOHNNY FUCKING CHRIST GIRL!
this story literally had me on the edge of my seat the WHOLE time! it took me 1 day to read it! (which in itself was a major shocker!) and i was reading the last few chapters really late at night and woke my father up 6 TIMES! but damn! it was so worth the grounding!

ive read the others and idk how the hell you do it but your fingers and brain are magical! BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ!

good job <3 =DD

just reread this story for like the 3rd time,
I think that it is still my favorite story here on mibba.
and by far my favorite A7X story(:

i luv it it might possibly be the best story i hav eva read

Love the story, i read it when you first started writing it ^_^
But I have to say...
Chapter 23...
Marvel IS SO much better than DC.
Just had to state my opinion =)
Love this, again. <3

I love this. Oh my God. Oh my God. Oh my God! What is he doing?!

You idiot! You know what he’s doing! WHY ARE YOU LETTING HIM?!

lmao! This is great!, Too funny.!

So I read it...again. I couldn't help it! This is one of the funniest, most adrenaline fueled and dynamic stories I've ever read! So good!

Anyways, I absolutely loved it, even more then when I read it for the first time. Seriously if you changed names and whatnot, you would probably be able to publish this. But I always tell you that, don't I?

The ending is so fucking precious! I said 'Awe' about a hundred times by the time I finished reading the whole thing. And I'm so beyond glad that you didn't really kill Brian, I mean I knew he was alive but reading it again, I literally felt my stomach drop at the news of him being dead. So scary....

I can't wait for your new story!

soo I just caught up with this after finally being done with APs and OH MAN i cannot believe that ending!
seriously I was so convinced he was dead! Good twist there.
So since this is the end I'll just say good job on an amazing story. It was different than every other romance story I ever read and that really made it stand out. :D

holymotherfuckingshit! :crazy:
i caught up and finally finished this!
wow...i seriously thought he died! gahhh you! *shakes fist*
and then bam! i knew he had to have faked it! but i was like there were pics of him therefore he was identified! but noooo. haha. :cute:
bonnie and clyde all over again! loved teh ending and when she punched him :lmfao

that was absolutely amazing and really wow!
amazing job and i cant wait for more of your stories.
definitely keeping up with your posts!

Awesome update I loved it.