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  • KillLui

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    I fucking loved it.
    can't wait to read your other stories, this was just fucking amazing.
    Really. I don't even know what else to say. I'm speechless. damn it.
    okay, I'm done swearing now. [:
    May 4th, 2009 at 11:29pm
  • xBelekinax

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    Wow, I loved your story. Literally, it was perfect. You've left me speechless, and that's saying something. I'm really really looking forward to reading more of your work.
    May 4th, 2009 at 02:23pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    I absolutely love the epilogue!!! I just feel bad that they will be on the run for a very long time, at least Brian didn't leave her behind and they can finally be happy together.
    Love this story to death and can't wait to see what other amazing stories ideas you have in mind.
    May 3rd, 2009 at 11:05pm
  • emo_jamiet

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    I don't know whether to kill you, or hug you.... Then again, I can't really do either. But I love you! And I also hate you... I nearly cried. I might have actually cried earlier on. Or maybe it's just allergies. I should still kill you though!
    May 3rd, 2009 at 04:33pm
  • nikkixgoesxRAWR

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    Fuckin' hell... I just read this whole story in 2 to 3 hours. All 33 (I think it was 33) chapters. Geez, you have no idea how addicting this was! So I'm a bit bummed out that I didn't get to read this story from the beginning (and rather, read it from the end), but shit, I have no comment. It was just that good.
    May 2nd, 2009 at 01:53pm
  • Ri0t

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    awesome end!
    aww their on the run together
    motherfucking cops
    the cops suck
    awesometasticcerealness
    it was the best ever seriously
    such a good ending
    (thnx for mentioning me)
    awesome!!!
    May 2nd, 2009 at 07:38am
  • LifeLovesMusic

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    The epilogue was awesome! If fit great with the story line and everything that happened. I love how you brought the wedding vows into it. I've never seen those brought in except for at an actual wedding so yay! haha

    I guess I only have one question left...they figured out that Brian was still alive even after he faked his own death, but they never found Zacky or Tess. I guess my question is just how not? I mean, It wasn't that hard to find Zacky and someone had to have known his name so the police would know. oh well

    The whole story was simply amazing and I'm looking forward to your next story because if this one was really amazing, I can't wait to see what you come up with next! so start it soon!!!

    ♫Peace Out♫
    May 1st, 2009 at 05:57pm
  • Derpina.

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    How sweet. That ending really suited this story very well.

    I enjoyed this alot. =] You're an awesome writer.
    May 1st, 2009 at 05:56am
  • Revolutionary

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    i love it. way better than i ever imagined it. i'll be waiting for that new story of yours:)
    May 1st, 2009 at 12:24am
  • ButterflyWarmth

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    Hey! This was just amazing! This story is my absolutely favorite on this site and anyone who has read it can tell why.

    I loved the epilogue - it was fun and adorable. Brian turned from a complete asshole in the beginning to a prince charming in the end. Tess on the other hand learned how to live freely.

    It makes me kind of sad that it ended because now there isn't anything to look that much forward to, but I'll be okay and maybe in a while I'll come back and read it again!

    Thanks for writing such a captivating piece of literature, and yes it is just as good, if not better than some of the bestselling fiction books out there. Can't wait to read your other stories!
    April 30th, 2009 at 10:49pm
  • MusicSavedMyLife

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    I
    Fucking
    Loved
    IT!!!!

    Totally amazing.
    April 30th, 2009 at 10:39pm
  • Shad.Shadows

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    I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!!!!!!You're an amazing writer!!! Clap
    That was an AWESOME ending i loved how their gonna be on the run together,that's so cute!!!
    April 30th, 2009 at 08:33pm
  • XdarkblueX

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    AWESOME STORY!!!!!!!!!!
    on the run again....
    atleast they are together and happy

    cant wait to read another one of your stories
    April 30th, 2009 at 07:47pm
  • Tilers Haner

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    The Epilogue was amazing, just like the rest of the story :)

    I have loved, and been a fan of this story form the start! It has had me hooked all the way through and was so stoked to be asked to be apart of it! I'm gutted that it has come to an end but am looking forward to your new story! :)

    You're an amazing writer and will continue to support and promote your stories for as long as I'm a member of this site :)
    April 30th, 2009 at 07:32pm
  • Hannahdoll

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    Yeah..
    I was wondering if he was ever gonna get caught again.
    That was cute that he remembered the day the met.
    I'm sad to see it finally end, but I'm excited for a new story.
    :]
    April 30th, 2009 at 05:10pm
  • DeadlyLullaby.

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    Awe so cute I loved it!
    April 30th, 2009 at 04:26pm
  • mazikeen-

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    xD!
    I love how it's not a complete happily-ever-after ending.
    And for a moment there I thought he was going to leave Tess, again!
    ...and thank God he didn't.
    And Zacky saved them, in a way <33333

    Aha, I love this fic, just the way I love all your other fics!
    Can't wait for the next ;D
    <333
    April 30th, 2009 at 02:37pm
  • emodeerf

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    this was an awesome story. (:
    kinda sad that you're not going to write a sequel.
    but oh wells.
    some things are best left like that.
    hehs.

    can't wait for your next story! (:
    April 30th, 2009 at 01:23pm
  • shaddix

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    oh, i'm still totally in love with this story, even if it's over.
    i'm looking forward to your new one!! =D

    xx.
    April 30th, 2009 at 11:31am
  • Synfullytwysted

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    This story doesn't need a sequel, I love the fact that it's been left with them disappearing into the night like that :) xx
    April 30th, 2009 at 09:59am