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  • SquiddyTheMouse

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    I love this <3
    I think you should definitely keep this story a Rydon. Definitely. Rydon.
    January 4th, 2013 at 01:08pm
  • area_loser

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    I feel as though you should keep it a Rydon. Also I really hope you don't change too much of the story. You have a good thing going, it just almost seems like what you were going for was lost somewhere. I don't mean that meanly. I've done it a million times myself. Anyways, good luck with whatever you decide to do.
    March 12th, 2012 at 07:48am
  • Canary Cry

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    I sayas rewrite it as an original. I love it as a Rydon, but i feel like you could do more with it if you had less restriction with the characters personalities or what they looked like.
    March 12th, 2012 at 03:19am
  • silly little person

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    OHMYGOSH!!! FINALLY! AN UPDATE!!!! :D
    October 27th, 2011 at 12:34pm
  • thisxchicksxnotxokay

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    UPDATE DAMMIT!!!!! I wanna know what haaaaaaappeenned! I'm sooo confuuuuuused! Update ;) please.
    December 24th, 2010 at 10:33am
  • Daisy Chainsaw

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    Now we know why Brendon hasent been kicked out! :)
    June 12th, 2010 at 12:35am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Update?
    Please?!?!?!

    -kayt
    June 6th, 2010 at 12:56am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    okay, i'm confused! WHAT HAPPENED!!!!

    -kayt
    March 15th, 2010 at 08:25pm
  • thenamesheather

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    =O
    Hang on, what?!?!?!?
    What's going on?
    This is brilliant.
    March 15th, 2010 at 07:40pm
  • Jackles-67

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    No, someone tied Brendon up before the date. So he couldn't have gone on it with Evan. But Brendon doesn't know who tied him up and he thinks its Evan.
    March 15th, 2010 at 01:39am
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    Okay, I feel kinda stupid.
    I'm confused.
    So Evan tied up Brendon, then took him on a date? Was the date all in Evans head? What did Evan want from Ryan exactly?
    Woah. *confusion*

    I still loved the update.

    Please update soon! =]
    March 15th, 2010 at 01:37am
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    Gar!
    I need to know what his offer is.
    Although I think I may be able to guess.......
    But I may be wrong.
    Grrr I need to know! Please update!
    March 3rd, 2010 at 01:29am
  • overcastkid

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    Oh god Ryan doesn't know what he's getting himself into. Evan's gonna ask for Brendon, that's so unfair. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!
    March 2nd, 2010 at 10:18pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    whoa-ers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    evan wants brendon, don't he??
    D:

    -kayt
    March 2nd, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • thenamesheather

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    What's his offer????
    I want to know now. =(
    This is great. =D
    March 2nd, 2010 at 09:07pm
  • chewing on tinfoil

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    Garr! Evil hotel owner. I agree with OvercastKid and xMychemxLeex

    Bree and Pete need to get kicked out!

    Not poor ryro.

    *tear*

    update please!
    March 1st, 2010 at 05:36am
  • overcastkid

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    HOLY SHIT!!!!! What, why dose Ryan have to get kicked out?!?! I agree with xMyChemxLeex if ANYONE should go it needs to be Pete and Bree. And I, too, want J-Walk and Spin back='[
    UPDATE PLEEEEEEEEEAAASSEE!!!!!!!!!!!!
    March 1st, 2010 at 03:19am
  • Lee_Loves_Frerard

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    Noooooo xD
    New chapter. No one's leaving this place. Unless it's Pete and Bree.
    And I want Jon and Spin back :c
    February 28th, 2010 at 01:32pm
  • mad_hatter_

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    ok i want to know what happens next,update soon please!!!!!!
    February 26th, 2010 at 02:44pm
  • iamFINE

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    Finally, an update! Haha, thanks for updating =]
    <3 Manda
    February 25th, 2010 at 02:56am
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