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  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    So... i love this story even more now that i listened to the song Heartbreak Hotel by Elvis Presley...
    which... idk, just makes it so much more real.
    :D
    wow... Ryan's a sex addict

    -Kayt
    September 4th, 2009 at 05:22am
  • iamFINE

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    Oh, my geeze! Definitely didn't expect that one! lol
    Thank you so much for updating. Please try to do it again soon?
    <3 Manda
    September 4th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • Fran

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    awethome. :( I love ryan he's such a cutie. By the way, are Smith and JWalk like, together? :) :) :) that would be waaaay awethome!
    July 5th, 2009 at 06:47pm
  • disturbed_peace

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    who's the girl??
    June 21st, 2009 at 01:53am
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update
    June 16th, 2009 at 08:25pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    LOVE IT!
    Poor Ryan, everyone around him is getting better and he's not.

    -Kayt
    June 15th, 2009 at 11:43pm
  • See.

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    Oh, no! Jon and Spencer are leaving to go and be lovey-dovey, and leaving Ryan all alone. ):
    More soon?
    June 15th, 2009 at 11:37pm
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    I love the new update...
    Poor Ry..... *sad face*
    That's all i got for now, it's too hot for anything else.

    -Kayt
    April 27th, 2009 at 12:06am
  • See.

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    No, not Pete!!
    WHAT ABOUT BRENDON??????
    Stupid Ryan. Ugh.
    Great chapter.
    Update soon, plpease?
    April 26th, 2009 at 11:38am
  • N3g4r

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    UPDATE! FINALLY:)
    Don't tell me Ryan and Pete get together:( this supposed to be a yan/Brendon lol!
    April 26th, 2009 at 07:35am
  • Alice Verney

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    cute update
    April 26th, 2009 at 05:02am
  • ttttt

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    PETE?!?!
    What about Brenny? =(
    April 26th, 2009 at 03:05am
  • Deputy Heart Eyes

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, Brendon....
    He sounds so sad and pathetic and lonely.... *Sad face*
    Great update(s) though.....

    -Kate
    April 5th, 2009 at 05:24pm
  • See.

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    Loved it! Stupid Ryan and Pete making Brendon feel lonely.
    That flashback was really interesting, too. I want to know more!!
    I'm sorry, I'm really crap at making up characters. I can barely do it for my own stories. =/
    Can't wait for more!
    April 5th, 2009 at 03:07pm
  • N3g4r

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    wow I liked it so muchlike always;)
    April 5th, 2009 at 10:41am
  • alex suarez.

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    Well, I'm going to do a female character.
    Petite, dark brown hair that goes red in the light, black nerd glasses.
    Quiet, thinks things over, but is secretly really dirty minded.Find you a picture soon.
    Here!
    Kind of like this, except she is paler.
    April 5th, 2009 at 09:12am
  • Alice Verney

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    awesome update
    April 5th, 2009 at 04:05am
  • Alice Verney

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    damn wonder what bden will do
    April 5th, 2009 at 02:50am
  • PATDROCKS!

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    aww
    everyone is ignoring brendon
    its so sad
    they are totally not being good friends
    ill hang out with you brenny boy lol
    i love this story
    :mrgreen:
    April 5th, 2009 at 02:15am
  • ALovelyVampire

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    DUDE TWO HUGS??? =D

    Awww, poor Brenny's getting jealous.

    That makes sense, that rule for the Heartbreak Hotel. I mean, it's the Heartbreak Hotel, after all XD

    Anywayz, I can't wait for more!!! *excited*
    April 5th, 2009 at 01:07am
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