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  • lups

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    ::comment for chapter five::

    OOO mikey!! better yet: mikey with animal instincts!! sweet. That was a very good dialogueless chapter and i just admire you because youre so franking good at describing things.
    July 22nd, 2007 at 02:59pm
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    ::comment for chapter four::

    vampires!!!! *does the vampire a go-go dance* damn humans, they think they own everything thats in the world! i hope vampires had a good reason to exterminate them...
    July 22nd, 2007 at 09:26am
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    ::comment for chapter three::

    god damn you, i wish i could describe things like you do.

    ::CLICKS chapter four while glaring at you:: GEEZ
    July 22nd, 2007 at 09:20am
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    if you keep talking to me ill get distracted even more!!!

    i run because... its good for your health? O_O
    July 22nd, 2007 at 09:13am
  • horsie890

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    Why are you running to chapter three when you could just click on it? O_O

    Yeah, no kidding. Ignore all distractions and read like your life depends on it!
    July 22nd, 2007 at 09:06am
  • lups

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    of course i knew MCR will be in it! its just that i dont like much the stories with other people, hence my addiction to slash weee

    ::comment for chapter two::

    =OO what was it? a werewolf??? i must find out! *runs to chapter three*

    man, i have too many interruptions out here <.<
    July 22nd, 2007 at 09:03am
  • horsie890

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    ::comment for chapter one::

    you know im not a big fan of stories that involve other than the mcr boys... and even though this chapter was only about alicia, i will read the rest, just because i trust you and i know you will make of this a truly masterpiece, like always *grin*

    besides.... bloodthirsty creatures? flesh-ripping claws? oooooo
    Of course MCR will be in it! I wrote (am still writing) this story. That goes without saying.
    July 22nd, 2007 at 08:40am
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    ::comment for chapter one::

    you know im not a big fan of stories that involve other than the mcr boys... and even though this chapter was only about alicia, i will read the rest, just because i trust you and i know you will make of this a truly masterpiece, like always *grin*

    besides.... bloodthirsty creatures? flesh-ripping claws? oooooo
    July 22nd, 2007 at 08:31am
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    Awesome keep it up :D
    July 21st, 2007 at 03:37pm
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    I'm commenting because I hate the number 100, 101 is the shit. xD
    July 21st, 2007 at 01:40pm
  • DyingxBlackxRosex

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    That is really really amazing this has to be the best vampire story with my chemical romance ever!!! nice job.....UPDATE SOON!!!!
    July 21st, 2007 at 10:17am
  • DyingxBlackxRosex

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    That is really really amazing this has to be the best vampire story with my chemical romance ever!!! nice job.....UPDATE SOON!!!!
    July 21st, 2007 at 10:17am
  • waitingforsomething

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    Hey, you've almost hit 100! You got an idea?!? Since you're obviously not going to tell me right here or now, I think you should update. Immedeately.
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:21am
  • horsie890

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    waitingforsomething:
    to h891: I'm glad you're here. Maybe we can have a REAL conversation now rather than just thwacking each other with random animals, objects, bands, and band members.
    to h889: Would you like to visit my school?
    to horsie(all of you): My point is, it would leave a bit of a hole in your story if you just decided to ignore the existance of 2/5 of MCR for the rest of this MCR fan fic. Well, that's the case I'm making, at least.
    h891: Possibly. That thwacking thing is so childish.

    h889: Mwahahahaha!!

    Me: Point taken. That does make sense, I guess. Even though I don't know how I'm going to do it.

    Screw that. Just got an idea.
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:19am
  • waitingforsomething

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    to h891: I'm glad you're here. Maybe we can have a REAL conversation now rather than just thwacking each other with random animals, objects, bands, and band members.
    to h889: Would you like to visit my school?
    to horsie(all of you): My point is, it would leave a bit of a hole in your story if you just decided to ignore the existance of 2/5 of MCR for the rest of this MCR fan fic. Well, that's the case I'm making, at least.
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:17am
  • horsie890

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    waitingforsomething:
    Hehe... horsie 891? I don't believe we've met XD
    Bob can convince Ray that what?
    *thwack with cat* put them back in the story or DIE! Um.... I mean... *hides from police*
    horsie891 is the more intelligent half of me.
    h891: Nice to meet you, wfs. Sorry you have to put up with this on a daily basis.
    ...and horsie889 is my evil half...
    h889: *blows up Switzerland*

    *thwacks with elephant* But it might not work! And I really want it to work! I don't know...
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:13am
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    Hehe... horsie 891? I don't believe we've met XD
    Bob can convince Ray that what?
    *thwack with cat* put them back in the story or DIE! Um.... I mean... *hides from police*
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:10am
  • horsie890

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    waitingforsomething:
    Wait... you have everything typed out? Does that mean that you could, maybe, if you so chose, update again? Now?
    I meant the plot silly.:mrgreen: I have the plot typed out. But nothing is ever definite when I do that. More of a loosely-woven outline.
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:09am
  • horsie890

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    waitingforsomething:
    Perhaps, like chocolate, bittersweet is better.
    I beg to differ. The sweeter the better as far as chocolate goes. Though I do like dark chocolate...

    I half-retract my earlier statement. CASE DISMISSED.
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:08am
  • waitingforsomething

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    Wait... you have everything typed out? Does that mean that you could, maybe, if you so chose, update again? Now?
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:07am