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  • horsie890

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    Pleeeeeeeeease? Bob is my favorite... and you can't just leave Ray lying unconscious in a forest. And Bob sounded like he was willing to work with Frank, Mikey, and Gerard. Can't they be friends again? *pouts*
    Alas, I know that you're not fond of overly sappy endings. Perhaps, like chocolate, bittersweet is better.
    I guess that makes sense. And I do want more chapters.

    But seeing the way I've characterized Ray in this makes me wonder how he's going to react to what Bob did. Just a bit of brainstorming here:

    Ray gets mad at Bob, kicks Bob out, Bob has nowhere to go, can't live with our vampire friends because we've already established that that doesn't work...

    Nah...I don't really like the sound of it. Maybe Bob can convince Ray that-

    *thwack with fish*

    horsie891: DON'T GIVE IT AWAY!!!
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:07am
  • waitingforsomething

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    Pleeeeeeeeease? Bob is my favorite... and you can't just leave Ray lying unconscious in a forest. And Bob sounded like he was willing to work with Frank, Mikey, and Gerard. Can't they be friends again? *pouts*
    Alas, I know that you're not fond of overly sappy endings. Perhaps, like chocolate, bittersweet is better.
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:05am
  • horsie890

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    Aww...now you're goin' and makin' me feel all guilty...
    Wait... so that means... NO MORE BOB AND RAY?!?!? You're killing me here! No
    I can't help it if I've got everything already typed out. What else should I do with them?

    ...then again, Ray is currently lying unconscious in a forest...
    July 21st, 2007 at 08:02am
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    horsie890:
    Aww...now you're goin' and makin' me feel all guilty...
    Wait... so that means... NO MORE BOB AND RAY?!?!? You're killing me here! No
    July 21st, 2007 at 07:57am
  • horsie890

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    Hey love the updates. This story gets better and better!!!! Punk Punk Punk Punk Vampire :con: :D :D
    Thanks a lot! And I love all the smilies. They make me smile. :mrgreen: Smiley Smiley
    July 21st, 2007 at 07:47am
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    Aww...now you're goin' and makin' me feel all guilty...
    July 21st, 2007 at 07:39am
  • waitingforsomething

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    Stuff is happening. Sorry, that's the only way to describe it. I like it XD.
    So, Mikey's still injured. And I'm still wondering if anything else is going to happen with Ray and Bob. Because they're too cool to just disappear from this story.
    July 21st, 2007 at 07:33am
  • Personal Jesus

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    Hey love the updates. This story gets better and better!!!! Punk Punk Punk Punk Vampire :con: :D :D
    July 21st, 2007 at 07:29am
  • Welshiee

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    OOoooooooooo!!! :D
    I likey x<3
    July 20th, 2007 at 07:25pm
  • horsie890

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    THIS IS SO FREAKIN AWESOME! It's very creative! I subscribed!
    Aw, thanks, both of you...MY STORY DOES NOT SUCK!!

    I'm serious. Heh heh.
    July 20th, 2007 at 11:12am
  • V. Valo

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    THIS IS SO FREAKIN AWESOME! It's very creative! I subscribed!
    July 20th, 2007 at 10:04am
  • fountainhead

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    I agree with everyone else, pretty much.
    this story sucks!
    KIDDING! KIDDING!

    Hehe sorry. I really do like it. Love how you describe everything nicely, and the character actions and personalties are very well defined. Please keep this up!
    July 20th, 2007 at 09:57am
  • Think Happy Thoughts

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    Quite original story idea. I love how you write it.
    I'm confused about something. Since when did Jamia become a vampire?
    July 19th, 2007 at 01:38pm
  • waitingforsomething

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    After you told me at what, one o'clock today, that you were going to update, YOU UPDATED! And Gee said that it was good. I loved it XD I'm kinda relieved that they've turned the girls, I mean, I figured it'd have to happen eventually if they didn't die. I love Bob. But you knew that. Maybe he and Ray can be friends with Gee, Frankie, and Mikey again?
    July 19th, 2007 at 12:45pm
  • Hayley-x-Bailey

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    Best. Vampire. Fic. EVER.

    Period. I love the way you write, I can't wait for more. Update, like, NOW!

    *Subscribes*
    July 19th, 2007 at 12:04am
  • waitingforsomething

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    Action sequence!!! *cheers for Bob* I really loved this chapter! Hmmm... wait, so did venom touch Alicia's skin or something? I hope Ray gets a little less evil eventually... Damn, this story is AWESOME!
    July 18th, 2007 at 11:12pm
  • SomethingEdge

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    nawww poor raybaby
    July 18th, 2007 at 03:11pm
  • Welshiee

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    Uh-oh ...
    Awesome x
    July 18th, 2007 at 04:02am
  • horsie890

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    Mikey! Bite her NOW!!! *screams in to pillow*
    This is so exciting! What's going to happen next? Damnit, I can't even beg you to update right NOW because you're not online!!! Awesome update, and very very cruel cliffhanger. >:l But I'm still excited ^_^
    AHAHAHAHAHAHA!! You make me laugh. Screaming into your pillow like that. I had a feeling a few of you would react like that. Don't worry; next chapter will be very...um...actiony!!
    July 17th, 2007 at 09:49pm
  • Think Happy Thoughts

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    *Gasps*
    An update, and I like it =]
    July 17th, 2007 at 02:41pm