Broken Glass and Bleeding Hearts - Comments

  • MarriahShadz

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    I feel like a schmuck for taking so long to read this update.
    I found it all very cute. Especially when Ellie's aunt was messing with her about Victoria's Secret. :D
    I am definitely looking forward to the next one.
    September 6th, 2009 at 03:22am
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    Jeez. I was kinda freaking out there. With the whole Angelica thing.
    What a weird name for her. Angelica, she is so not an angel.
    I loved this chapter, kid. I was inexplicably worried.
    Angelica would do just about anything wouldn't she?
    I love how Zacky would help Ellie with whatever, so long as he didn't have to dress as a chick. :D
    July 15th, 2009 at 06:58am
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    I wonder what they are going to find out about her! If they get to...
    Update soon :D
    July 14th, 2009 at 11:59pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Man, I wish that it hadn't taken me so long to read that update, it was so awesome.
    I loved the whole Jimmy terrorizing kids thing. :XD I could see that happening in my head.
    July 1st, 2009 at 07:00am
  • Dean Winchester

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    I absoutley loved the update's. Sorry i hadn't let any comments lately. Been extremely busy. Anywho. Loved them babe! can't wait for more dear :D!
    June 8th, 2009 at 05:50am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Loved the update, kid.
    Even though I wished Matt hadn't held Ellie back.
    What the hell was that slut trying to accomplish anyway?
    June 8th, 2009 at 02:50am
  • MarriahShadz

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    “Don’t do anything diirrttyyy.”
    I would sooo do some diirrttyyy. Nyam

    Loved the update.
    I found the whole thing adorable, from Ellie and Star's phone conversation to Matt rushing to Ellie's closet to see her "dress" and the whole shopping thing where Star forced Ellie to try on the dress.
    May 28th, 2009 at 08:27am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Okay, I loved the update.
    The first part made me laugh so hard.
    I felt so bad for Ellie and her frilly dresses.
    May 12th, 2009 at 07:54am
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    “No guys this is seriously a good plan! Just listen!” He stopped bouncing and the childish look disappeared from his face. “We are going to kidnap her,” He pointed to the slut “And then we are going to tie her to a chair and find a shark tank and-”

    “Jimmy, Jimmy, Jimmy, any pain that thing has to endure is going to come directly from my fist.” I cut in. Jimmy’s expression dropped.

    “Damn it.” He sank back to the sand and began pouting.

    “Sorry Jimmy but really that is the only thing that will make me feel better.”

    “It’s okay. I knew it was a long shot anyway.” He sighed and then turned right back into being his crazy Jimmy self.
    :lmfao

    That whole part was genius. Clap

    Kid, this was so awesome. Truly.
    For whatever reason, I found all of the flashbacks so cute.
    And after reading the last flashback, I had teared up slightly, which I think is weird, cause it wasn't at all sad. It was pretty funny.
    April 24th, 2009 at 08:05am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Loved the update.
    Why can't Ellie just break Angelica's nose and get it over with?
    I know I can't wait to see that spot of violence. :D
    Thanks again for the link in your A/N, made me smile. :D
    April 13th, 2009 at 08:15pm
  • bloodravyn

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    awesome
    April 4th, 2009 at 10:45pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    One: Amazing update, kid. I loved it.

    Two: What did that slut tell Matt?

    Three: Thank you so effin' much!!!! :D
    April 4th, 2009 at 09:13am
  • Dean Winchester

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    Ok first all!
    EFFIN AWSOME!
    Second!
    M. Shadows!!!
    Third!
    What a jerk just to stop talking to his bestfriend, after he turns 16, so rude!
    Fourth!
    I AM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY :D!!!
    April 3rd, 2009 at 09:51pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    I absolutely loved it!
    I was on the edge of my seat when I read that last dream.
    I hate to think of Matt dying repeatedly in Ellie''s dreams.
    And I knew it was that slut in her dreams, I just knew it!
    Thanks for the advert, kid. :D
    April 2nd, 2009 at 07:58am
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    Loved it! :D
    I really liked the bit where Ellie was trying to get Matt to drink her blood and she brought up all those old times...that was cute.
    March 6th, 2009 at 05:28pm
  • bloodravyn

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    loved!
    March 5th, 2009 at 11:16am
  • bloodravyn

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    scary
    March 1st, 2009 at 07:45am
  • MarriahShadz

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    Are you kidding me?! I loved it!
    That part were she was dreaming had me shaking. A world without him...nope, can't think about it. :D
    February 28th, 2009 at 08:33pm
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    loved
    February 23rd, 2009 at 10:12pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Stupid council.
    I liked this chapter, adds some drama.
    The next one will be out soon, yeah?
    February 23rd, 2009 at 08:36am