Lampposts, Demonic Siblings and a Broken Toaster. Can It Get Any Worse? - Comments

Whoa, it's been a while. Sorry about that.
PS I rewrote some of the beginning chapters so that it would make more sense! Hopefully the story will look a lot more fluid now :)

I like the story so far. Can't wait for the next update.=D

Yaaaay! This is totally amazing =] You kinda confused me with the whole 'This is not chapter 7, but the new beginning chapter' but still an amazing story =] <3

I dont even remember subscribing to your story 0.o odd but still glad that it showed up in my inbox because it's an awesome story update soon.:)

Elliebee:

it's really good just a bit hard to follow at times- like her ankle breaking then suddenly she's walking out the front door. But it's good! good descriptions!

Oh that was because i wasnt planning it at the time, and then after proof-reading i discovered that as well :P
Fortunately, i have thought of something for that, but you will find out later on in the story ;)

it's really good just a bit hard to follow at times- like her ankle breaking then suddenly she's walking out the front door. But it's good! good descriptions!

I like it - looks really good!!

ooooh
i like it:D:D
update sooonnn!!:D
xoxo
*subscribes*

Yay! You updated!
I liked this chapter.
The shadow walkers sound creepy.
Keep it coming, it's starting to get real good. :D

I want longer chapters =) Yay for the update!

Love the story!

I'm really kinda intrigued.
I thought I had commented yesterday...I guess not.
Either way I'm digging this.
:D

i love ittt... im subscribing!!<3

love.thy.goldfish:

oh. So I realize I should have read all of chapter 3 and not just the first few sentences and I would have not needed to ask those questions... so =) cool. Sorry to uh, mix that up. Keep writing!

Hey sorry >.<

I realize that sometimes my writing is quite confusing, because i dont usually read over it and check every little bitty ;)

SOrry again, would you like me to make sense of it? I could do that, it might help actually ... :)

(hehe)

oh. So I realize I should have read all of chapter 3 and not just the first few sentences and I would have not needed to ask those questions... so =) cool. Sorry to uh, mix that up. Keep writing!

What happened? What lips? What?? I don't understand the giant skip in chapter two. what slammed into her like a freak car crash? Huh?

I think this story has a lot of potential but I don't understand....