Harbour Lights - Comments

SAD!!!
He needs a smack to the head.

How could Will do that?!?!?!

D:
Poor Mare.
Will needs to re-evaluate. Not one chapter ago, he didn't even want to be with Evie.
Tsk tsk.
Well, he has to make mistakes before he can fix them...

I

Will

Fucking

Kill

Him.

oh lord

I'm amazed that I cannot find one single mistake throughout all of these chapters. It's so refreshing after reading all these other stories by people who have horrible grammar. This story is so intricately plotted out..I just love it! Keep it up, really (:

What an asshole. And he doesn't even love her. He's going to realize his mistake in a couple of hours.
Update soon please :)

I'm looking forward to the next update!! I guess this "double date" will be catastrophic...

This is about to get interesting. ;]

Loved the update!
More soon please :)

This shall be interesting

This shall be interesting

Billy Bamf
The end.
Lol, no jk jk.
I started laughing when I saw that! Glad you used it =]
I love how much of an awesome writer you are, it's...incredible lol

uhh as fas I know, this story has finished? Are u rewritting it again? S:

He asked her to marry him!? And she said no! Why would she do that?? Please update soon!

Chapter Ten reminds me of this really good book I read about a month back called Clouds. It's by Robin Jones Gunn. This is definately different, but I enjoy it just as much, if not more, than I did that book. Keep this up. I know you're re-writing it, but it's very good (:

Ah, the truth comes out!
Poor Will and Marilyn.
I'm glad Adam and Chante got them to open up.
It's good for them.

"He asked me to marry him," she finally replied in a small voice, "and I said no."
Aww so sad... but that chapter was brilliant! :)

Amazing :)

Wow. Forgot about Will's problem.
Bad Will!
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