Harbour Lights - Comments

I'm so thankful I found this story. I can count on my one hand how many Mibba stories I've read that are this well-written. I read it all in like 4 hours. It's absolutely lovely and the ending literally made me cry. I'm also so sad I've come to the end of it. You're a brilliant writer. Thank you for this beautiful, beautiful story. Thank you thank you thank you.

Completely late on reading this story. Im not sure if you even write on here anymore, but you deserved a comment. I actually googled good stories on mibba because I can never find quality ones anymore. I read this all in one shot. It brought me to tears of sadness and happiness, excitement, and every unpredictable emotion that come out in people when its about love. This was amazing. Youre brilliant

I'm a year late to this, but I read it all last night because of my insomnia, and I'm floored.
This is amazing.
I felt kind of bad for Evie, but at the end she was a frigid bitch.
I had lots oh pheels for Marilyn and Will. I truly love this!

I cried. I really cried. Just, oh my gosh, this was amazing <3
You're a brilliant writer.

I just read the whole story in two hours :)
BEST. STORY. I'VE. EVER. READ.
It was heart warming, heart breaking and strangely hilarious.
It was perfect in every way and the ending was so beautiful and so perfect. It's a suspense that will never be quenched. All we know is that it's a love story that will last forever :)
This was incredibly beautiful.

O. Em. Gee.

That's brilliant! I love your narration, and the ending was perfect, especially the way you contrasted their expectations and reality in the end.

This is one really addicting piece of work.

Alright, I've just finished the story. And bravo my dear. This is most likely one of the only stories on this website that I've had the desire to finish. I won't lie. There is only one author on here that I've bothered to read through an entire story and that's Ms.Marauder. So, I applaud you very much so. Like I said in my previous comment there were quite a few misspellings or inconsistencies, sometimes you forgot a word or misplaced a word. So if you ever need an editor I'd be happy to go through and fix it for you. :) Great job my dear.

Okay, so I'm on chapter 23 right now and can I say you are one of the only mibba authors that has been able to keep my captivated for so long? This story managed to entertain me for four hours at my workplace tonight and I work at a haunted house. For a Wednesday it was slow as all hell. BUT, I read this throughout the entire time and really, it's very well written. Now, I also saw that you were going through some editing and I just wanted to point out that you have some typos throughout your store as well as some inconsistencies. At one point you say that Will is the bassist, and then the guitarist and then the bassist. So you might want to go back and clarify that. And also, I assume this is just for effect and to reiterate your points, but you go back to a lot of things you've said before. Like at some points I feel it's unnecessary, nonetheless your story is fabulous and I'll be sure to leave another comment when I finish. :)

Ohhhhh PAGE CLAIM

This is probably THE most powerful story I have read in Mibba so far.
I felt emotions that would take me weeks to feel in 1 day by 1 story
Your imagination is amazing. Not only was the words descriptive but can be understood without a second glance.
It showed how a person's mind can be.
Sometimes I wonder why they just admit they still love each other and to get over it but now I know after all that has happened to them forgiveness is hard to get.
Love is even harder to accept

After re-reading all of your stories I have come to the conclusion that this is by far my favorite. I just love this story SO MUCH. Also, did you make your profile private or something? Because whenever I try to go there, it says I am not allowed to view it. Or just private to everyone but your friends or something? I'm not sure... Because it happened multiple times.

I LOVE YOUR STORIES!!!!! I read Sunshiner a while ago and HAD to read more of your stories!! You're a GREAT author!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

GOOOOOOD STORY!!!!!

Ok, I've decided to try and read all your stories since I'm like almost half-way done. But I'm not sure, should I? Hmmmmm. Anyway, I think this story is wonderfully cliche'. It's soooo good. It also proves my theory that anything can be the most cliche' thing ever (Not saying yours is), but if the writing is good (Yours is) it will ROCK.

I like Marilyn. PERFECT name for her. I was wondering how you would end the story without crushing everyone's hearts, and WOW, that was smart.

Soooo, sorry for so many caps and keep being AWESOME! Yay, ok, I'm done.

how do you play Ninja?

wow...this story is........I can't even describe it.
How could you even write this?Seriously.
You're the best writter I have ever met and I am serious when I say this:' You really should publish a book'.
That if you haven't published one yet.If you have,please tell me it's title so I can hurry up and buy it an read it and savour it^^.
You really should finish all your stories and forget the hiatus, because you are truly superiour to that word.
That simple,yet complex way you describe love; it's like all the tiny feelings you get when the one you love smiles,or touches you or brushes his lips against yours, in one simple way of describing them. You write with your heart and that is a quality worth respecting.
Caroline, you are the best.

Your biggest fan,
Me

Lovely lovely lovelyyy story :]

I love ur story. I love Adam in particular. haha.

Love this...I just finished it! I think this means that I have now read all of the stories you currently have posted. :D Your one of my favorite Mibba authors.

Wow, this story was so original and cute that I read the whole thing in one day :D

I loved this story, it was amazing. I read it all today, I just couldn't stop. Even if I could stop, I didn't want to. I know I already said this but I loved it! :)

You. are. good.
Enough said.