Emerald Eyes - Comments

Holy crap I love this

Amazing story!! i loveee it!!
Great story line, but I feel like the story got rushed when 80 found out about the love affair, I was expecting more drama, and emotion since the suspense was debating whether she would or would not get caught.
Above that, I thought it’s a great story line.

Update soon.
-Jess<3(;

grrr Roxana!! Just get back with ol' Bill and everything will be fine :D
I'm looking forward to the sequel, maybe Roxana will understand that she's causing more pain than any tabloid ever could.

Wow, that'd would've been deep if it made any sense at all.

And, if you don't mind, could you drop me a comment when you post the sequel? That would be just fine and dandy.

xx

yeah please :)

i really love all of your comments soso much! they all mean so much to me

@Jelo Biafra. She's making him leave because she doesn't want to risk his career of finding out he already has a new girlfriend after a long divorce, and she doesn't want her daughter to be in the tabloids' eyes as some kind of "love child" between her and Billie Joe. Hope that helped!

does everyone want me to comment them when i post the sequel so they know?

Realise you made a mistake Roxana and go after him :) Can't wait for the next chapter and the sequel

I still don't really understand why Roxana kicked him out.

:'(

I can't wait for the next chapter...and the sequal =]

I love it, but Roxana is bugging me too xD.
Maybe as a sequal you could do it from their daughter's eyes when she's a teenager, and how she starts to find out about everything.

Aghh Roxana is bugging me!!
Update soon!

Roxana is a bit of a bitch if you ask me.

But maybe thats cause i love Billie so much.

Update? :D

I love this story:) especially how your fitting the american idiot album round it all and relating the songs to the story :) can't wait to read more :)

I'm soo excited for the next update :)

love this story!!

I love it so much! You capture the essence of his eyes perfectly. Who wouldn't fall in love with a man with green eyes? Your writing is fabulous. I like how you describe Billie Joe's eyes as though they are the whole character. Well written.
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p.s I want to suck your blood

Gah! Things were going sooo good!!

thank you so much! that really means a lot, i actually was thinking of having the next sequal in Billie Joe's point of view actually! thanks so much for your suggestion<33

okay okay, amazing, it's that simple, hun! YOU ARE AN AMAZING, TALENTED, AND ALL AROUND WONDERFUL WRITER!!!

Oh, and I have a sugguestion for the sequel, you don't have you go with it but I thought that maybe you should put a couple of chapters in Billie Joe's (i love him) perspective, to really show off Roxy's personality, like how he sees her as, and how he reacts in his mind to how she is feeling.. <33 Okay, I love the story, and your writing style!!!
MADD!BL3U

Well fuck a duck...

no, no, we'd never lose interest in this! I find it so incredibly sweet that bj bought her and him a house to raise their baby in. <3 i literally aww'd at it. it's all just so sweet! i love it when i get an email notification that you've updated this. i so look forward to it.