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  • leaderoftheunwanted

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    Ha, "I hope you have to pee."

    I almost pissed myself laughing at that! Good job, more soon?
    February 15th, 2009 at 07:31pm
  • Caznesss

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    arrrrgh! you can't leave it there. I need to know! more`soon :)
    February 15th, 2009 at 07:23pm
  • asra hussain

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    OMG!! the suspense is killin me!!
    u have to update soon!
    absolutely love this story!!
    February 15th, 2009 at 02:45am
  • angels-on-the-moon

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    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!! i love ur story. the way you right using the um.. you's and your's instead of first person is just amazing
    i can't wait for more
    February 14th, 2009 at 11:03pm
  • Caznesss

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    oooh, just started reading...............loved this!
    February 14th, 2009 at 09:07pm
  • leaderoftheunwanted

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    HA! I KNEW IT!!!
    February 14th, 2009 at 07:15pm
  • Hippieantarchist

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    Ohmygosh I love it!
    February 14th, 2009 at 07:07pm
  • leaderoftheunwanted

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    in the 12th paragraph, part, thing- you was changed to I. Was that intentional?
    February 14th, 2009 at 02:55am
  • Hippieantarchist

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    I love this =]

    Please update soon!
    February 14th, 2009 at 02:41am
  • asra hussain

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    another great chapter
    looking 4ward 2 the next update
    February 13th, 2009 at 10:12pm
  • asra hussain

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    another great chapter
    looking 4ward 2 the next update
    February 13th, 2009 at 10:12pm
  • angels-on-the-moon

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    hehe but i thought she told mike in in earlier chpter cause he kept mummering
    'how could billie joy do this' or somting like that but any way i love the up date
    February 12th, 2009 at 09:03pm
  • asra hussain

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    love this story!!

    hope u update soon!!
    February 12th, 2009 at 03:21pm
  • leaderoftheunwanted

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    Wait a minute-in this chapter you said Tre' and Mike don't know. But didn't Roxana tell Mike a few chapters ago?

    Anyway, any mention of Tre' always makes me smile so good job! I needed to smile today. :mrgreen:
    February 12th, 2009 at 01:32pm
  • angels-on-the-moon

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    OMG she is so freacking prego omg he is so in for it now ooooohhhhhhhhhhhh hahha great update
    February 11th, 2009 at 11:39pm
  • leaderoftheunwanted

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    SHE'S PREGNANT!!! WHAT THE FUCK!!!
    February 11th, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • peacemaker.

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    Your writing is beautiful. I feel terrible for all of them.
    I love it. :]
    February 11th, 2009 at 09:21pm
  • leaderoftheunwanted

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    Lovely.
    February 11th, 2009 at 01:20am
  • angels-on-the-moon

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    that update was amazing i have no words but you are a talented and creative writer you know how to put the reader into the characters shoes
    February 10th, 2009 at 11:32pm
  • angels-on-the-moon

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    ooooomyyyyyyyyyygooooooooooooood okay like i am speachless
    February 10th, 2009 at 09:47pm
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