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  • HopelesslyInLove

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    doesnt she a little harsh? i mean, yes its awful to hide that kind of secret, but it was what her father wanted
    July 28th, 2009 at 07:41am
  • loverfayce.

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    Ha, it's okay. We all have those days… writer's block sucks.

    I thought this chapter was good, though. Even with Sydri being so mean to everyone.
    July 28th, 2009 at 04:47am
  • EarlySunsetDays

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    cant wait for the next chapter! =]
    July 12th, 2009 at 01:51am
  • Summer Finn.

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    Oh my gosh She slapped Gerard!! Poor Syndri!!!!
    July 11th, 2009 at 02:29am
  • YourPerfectIdiot

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    i love this story really good :)
    July 9th, 2009 at 11:38pm
  • loverfayce.

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    I find it amusing how she slaps Gerard and then expects him to drive her home…

    GASP! Smoking while under 18!
    I'm a nerd. But, still 0.o

    I can't wait to find out what happens next. She's gonna be mad at Mikey, too :O.
    That doesn't even makes sense. It's… Mikeeyyyyy.
    July 8th, 2009 at 06:16am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Awe, She learned the hard way
    July 8th, 2009 at 12:57am
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    make this story as long as you can do!!! I'm addicted to itt
    July 7th, 2009 at 01:10pm
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    oh f.ck.... I didnt hear that... Oh my god! How can they!!! I loved this update, I cant wait to go to hospital. I hope that Sydri can talk with her father and ask why he had done this
    July 7th, 2009 at 09:33am
  • loverfayce.

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    I think Nicola knowwwwwss somethinnngg.
    0.o
    July 7th, 2009 at 12:12am
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    o oww... this is not good, isnt it=( More please
    July 6th, 2009 at 08:29am
  • w...................

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    Meany! lol
    It wasn't crap, I enjoyed it. uh-oh =[
    Sydri is going to freak out and stop taking to Gerard and then her sister is going to put the moves on him and yeah... It's not going to be pretty. I'm just making random guesses.
    Update when you can!
    July 6th, 2009 at 08:29am
  • Summer Finn.

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    Yay! You updated!! Do it again! Please!!
    July 6th, 2009 at 12:14am
  • prettypiggie11

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    It does so deserve comments! Sydri and Nicola's stand off was like those frustrating moments you think about. You know, when you want to confront someone with something? But you never do. Go Sydri!
    June 30th, 2009 at 06:28am
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    another good chapter=) I hate Nicola, i hope she doesnt like Gerard. More please
    June 25th, 2009 at 07:17am
  • w...................

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    It doesn't suck!
    I hope Nicola isn't going to try to get Gerard because Sydri likes him!
    More when you can :D
    June 24th, 2009 at 10:15pm
  • loverfayce.

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    Too bad. I'm giving it comments anyways.
    I thought it was fine. Slightly filler-ish, but fine.
    I hate writer's block. It's designed to crush our dreams.
    LIKE THE INTERNET!
    June 24th, 2009 at 09:45pm
  • prettypiggie11

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    oops, sydri, sorry! <3
    June 23rd, 2009 at 05:18am
  • prettypiggie11

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    well, hello, old chap! gerard and sydry are gonna have babies... maby not in your story but in my mind six years from now they get married and have babies. -nods vigorously-
    June 23rd, 2009 at 05:17am
  • EarlySunsetDays

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    this story is so freakin good
    i need to know what happens its going to bother me
    =] update soon please
    June 19th, 2009 at 09:25pm
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