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  • prettypiggie11

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    You are feeling the need to write more... -cool mind bending powers-
    June 19th, 2009 at 09:06am
  • loverfayce.

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    I liked it alsoo.
    Coffee and cigarettes would smell really good… o.0
    I love the smell of coffee, but cigarettes are kind of nasty. Unless they got masked by the smell of coffee…
    Ahahaa. Let's move on now XD.

    OKAY, so I think that something's going to happen to Sydri's dad and he will be rushed to the hospital and he'll HAVE to tell Sydri why the hell he's there.
    bamm.

    And I also think that once Sydri and Nicola know about their dad they might get… slightly closer. Even though you said they wouldn't XD.
    June 16th, 2009 at 05:08pm
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    hey! I'm a new reader! -waves- and i really liked this story=) Cant wait for the next update
    June 14th, 2009 at 02:30pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    No one's telling her,
    this is going to be sad
    can't wait for more
    :)
    June 14th, 2009 at 08:42am
  • loverfayce.

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    None of them suck. All good.
    ALL GOOD.

    And I think Mikey is right. But I think they should just make Sydri's dad tell her. Or something. Because he's being crappy.
    (Sydri's dad, not Mikey)

    This comment was confusing.
    I'm hungry. That's why.
    June 13th, 2009 at 12:28am
  • Poison_Ivy

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    I love this.
    June 12th, 2009 at 04:21am
  • loverfayce.

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    Lucky. You're already out for summer.
    I'm not DX
    That's what I usually do in the summer, too x). Except this summer I'm going to try to run in the morning in an attempt to not kill myself come soccer season.
    We'll see how long that holds up.

    I didn't think that was very sucky. It was good, as usual :).
    OKAY.
    THE 'HIDDEN EMOTION'
    IS HATRED.
    FOR SYDRI'S DAD.

    I CALLED IT. I CALLED IT.
    June 9th, 2009 at 04:58am
  • xxxhidemyheartxxx

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    Thanks for the update......I hope he tells her...she deserves to know.
    June 9th, 2009 at 12:19am
  • Poison_Ivy

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    Aw. Someone better tell her. and soon,
    June 8th, 2009 at 07:05pm
  • secrets-that-die

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    she's going to take it really hard
    June 4th, 2009 at 11:01pm
  • fizzy blood

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    Ah! I read your story all in one day, I love it so far.
    June 4th, 2009 at 05:29pm
  • Poison_Ivy

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    I love it.
    June 4th, 2009 at 06:02am
  • lovin-this-feeling

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    I love this story so far! I hope one of the guys tell Sydri soon. =[

    <3 Boom Boom
    June 4th, 2009 at 05:39am
  • loverfayce.

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    Heh heh.
    I think Gerard is going to cracky crack.
    And then Sydri will be angry and heartbroken :(.
    June 4th, 2009 at 03:28am
  • Summer Finn.

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    No one has told her yet?! wtf...
    June 4th, 2009 at 02:40am
  • secrets-that-die

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    that's sad noone is telling her
    can't wait for more
    :]
    June 2nd, 2009 at 10:58pm
  • loverfayce.

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    She's getting suspiciousss.
    :OO.
    I'm kinda nervous to how she'll react DX
    June 2nd, 2009 at 10:33pm
  • Poison_Ivy

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    I like it. Its getting sad though...
    June 2nd, 2009 at 05:31am
  • Poison_Ivy

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    I love this. Its getting good!!
    May 26th, 2009 at 03:46am
  • Sadeyes

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    can't wait for the next chapter
    May 25th, 2009 at 10:08am
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