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  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    wuv it more soon plz!!!!!!!!
    August 25th, 2007 at 10:38am
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    Yeah. And Imma try to update tonight.
    August 25th, 2007 at 10:11am
  • Last American Girl

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    Damn! can all the comments be from me?

    **comments**
    August 25th, 2007 at 09:48am
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    Six or 5 togo.
    August 23rd, 2007 at 09:26pm
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    They had a fight. So it was to show, she neber gets it. 6
    August 23rd, 2007 at 09:26pm
  • Last American Girl

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    Im ever so slightly confused-ed-ed Leslie, likes Adam....or not?

    Good update though. Very nice indeedy
    August 23rd, 2007 at 06:22pm
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    Kay 7 to go. Shit I better start typing.
    August 23rd, 2007 at 12:57pm
  • DiabolicalDancer

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    yea, gonna need more to explain that one... i hope you get however many comments you need...
    August 23rd, 2007 at 12:35pm
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    Oopsie 8 actually. Geebob you get 2 cookies.
    August 23rd, 2007 at 12:07pm
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    9 more to go. And you get a cookie dance for being first.
    August 23rd, 2007 at 11:58am
  • LeCielNousAide

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    i liked the update a lot! please continue!
    August 23rd, 2007 at 11:50am
  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    wuvs it more soon plzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!
    August 23rd, 2007 at 11:48am
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    Sorreh for makng yeh read the cliff hanger again.
    August 21st, 2007 at 05:20am
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    Ahhh.
    You won't have to I'm almost finished with the next chapter.
    August 19th, 2007 at 09:37pm
  • DiabolicalDancer

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    Cool update. Short up left with a cliff hanger :) I'm trying to deicde if the arms around the neck are a good or bad thing. Do you mean like a hug or someone strangling her... please don't make me wait too long to find out
    August 19th, 2007 at 12:28pm
  • Last American Girl

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    Weow Weow!

    You updated! *does the 'she updated' dance**

    Woo-Freaking-Hoo 'For my Pineapple' =]
    August 19th, 2007 at 09:43am
  • EwiesitsTabbie

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    Will be edited soon.
    August 19th, 2007 at 05:10am
  • GeeandBobrockmysocks

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    wuvs it more soon plz!!!!!!
    August 19th, 2007 at 12:10am
  • princess.

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    Okay. You asked for help so here it is. :]

    I’m 5’2 105 pounds about large medium in shirts. There should be a comma between the different aspects of yourself. And when you say 'large medium' I assume that you're between the two and debating with yourself. There should be a comma between that too.

    Commas denote a pause between words, not long enough to be a sentence ender but long enough to mention. So when you're questioning your judgement on your comma placement, read out loud what you've written. Take a comma as it is and pause. If it doesn't seem like there should be a pause there then take it out. If the inflection is not as you meant it to be, if you want there to be a pause in a certain place but it's not the spot for a period or other sentence ender, put in a comma.

    Okay? :D
    August 17th, 2007 at 05:58am
  • Fueled By Dana

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    I loved the update! I can't wait for more!
    August 11th, 2007 at 11:40pm